This was my very first one shot that i have made so tell me what you think and tell me how to improve, but don't be mean about it!!

i think i did a pretty good job with it!

i believe it's an original piece

and i'm sorry for those that think i plagerized but i didn't i made it from the bottom of my heart and brain?

so yeah, if you get confused ask me questions if you feel like it!

and the pic i just pulled from google (i think the girl model is actually sekyung)

btw, this story makes Doo Joon look like a meanie or in my words, a jackass.

and I don't think there is anything wrong with both Doo Joon and Sunny, and I like them both very much

i just think they just fit right in with the story, so enjoy!!!