Chapter 1: Wonderfully written fic, it's absolutely amazing. A part of me wanted to smack Woohyun on the head every time Myungsoo appeared in hopes that he would finally realize that Myungsoo was there the whole time. Thankfully he realized on his own.

Chapter 1: I guess I know already why you call Jen senpai.

This is almost as close, if not even, a word vomit. I mean, hers is LITERAL word vomit, but yours is just prettyprettypretty, as expected from my favourite dongsaengie (and fellow antiyeol.) Anyhow, I listened to Coffee Shop while reading this, and PERFECT MUSIC IT'S LIKE MY PHONE'S A PERFECT OST LOOOOL.

Beautiful. Every line. Even punksoo. Even idgaf!namu. I guess we both like that, having an ignorant Woohyun.
THAT'S JUST HIM.

And congrats for not letting Sungyeol in there. He'd be annoying. (but when isn't he annoying tell me Star-ahh)

I LOVE YOU THANKS FOR DEDICATING LOVE YOU FOREVER.

to meeeeeeee? IT'S NOT EVEN MY OTP BUT OMG SO SWEET EVERYBODY IS PRESENTING ME WOOSOO OH MY GOSH.
AND MEH JEN'S NOT A SENPAI. ME NEITHER.

LOL YOU ANIT SUNGYEOL KID I BET HE'S HAPPY RIGHT NOW THAT AN ANTI FAN DOESN'T WRITE A THING ABOUT HIM FOR THE FIRST TIME.

getting ready to read btw.

Chapter 1: I like the story. But sungyeol is essential as a cameo. As principal character. As man in our life. Please keep putting him in your fics xD I love myungsoo in this fic =)

Chapter 1: (WOW EVEN WORD LIMIT'S ON TO ME)

(i.e. black tank top, chains) was something I'd gotten to assosiate with Myungsoo in here ;A; THERE WERE ALSO OTHER THINGS I HAVEN'T MENTIONED BUT THE WORD LIMIT FOR COMMENTS DISRUPTED MY FLOW SO IF I SUDDENLY COME BACK HERE WITH AN OH-YEAR-I-FORGOT-THIS YOU KNOW WHY ;D

asjhdakjas AND GO GET YOUR SIGNED SARA BAREILLES CD! 8D

Chapter 1: WOW SENPAI NO ONE LIKES U AND UR PERFECTION SO PLS EXCUSE YOURSELF OUT TO THE CAREFULLY CRAFTED DOOR CALLED 'AMAZING SPECTACULAR WRITRS: EXIST HERE'

asjdhakjashasjksadhakash no but seriously OTP + Woohyun POV + EVERYTHING AND JAHSDKJAHDKJASDHAJKDHAKJSDHAKJDHAKJAHDKJAHDASKJDHAKJSDHAJHJASKDHAJDAH

the last paragraph had me going dkjashdkajhdkja tbh ;A; SUCH A BEAUTIFUL ENDING ;A; Plus otp otp OTPPPPPPP~~~~~~~~

'Fall could be his favourite season; except he doesn’t have a favourite season because weather is weather and sometimes, it’s hot during winter and cold during summer and seasons just can’t prevent that. '
FFFFFFF- askjhakjdas this is such a sweet but relatable line like omg I love you because none of your stuff is sugar coated it's all relatable AND HOT WINTERS LIKE HELL OMFG ;A;

'Woohyun likes kids, they’re easy to understand. There are no complications with them, they demand what they want and express their feelings as they want. There was no mind to mouth filter, there are no practiced scenarios, or extreme expectations. It’s either you have or don’t have, and Woohyun appreciates simplicity like that.'

CRIES AT THE REALISM IN YOUR STATEMENT. Though I'll be guilty of putting people through mind to mouth puzzles, often paradoxes ;A;

'“I don’t have time.”/”You always have time, you just never use it.”'

SO RELEVANT I COULD CRY.

Plus I love all the references to pretzels and Woohyun's hatred, plus all those moments where he's not focusing ON THE LOVE OF HIS LIFE IN THIS OTP

'they did not meet often enough for Woohyun to understand Myungsoo.'

askjdhaskjashkjasdhajhaskjhaskjhakjdashkjadhdjasas FEELS.

so basically this whole story was a load full of feels (though most of it was you teasing me going THIS IS WHAT COULD'VE BEEN A GOOD RELATIONSHIP, BUT WASN'T) I also appreciate your attempts to stop Sungyeol from monopolizing every fic you write #SOMEWHATAPPRECIATEDBECAUSEILIKESUNGYEOL plus the deliberate repetition of descriptions -

JUST COMING BACK WITHOUT EVEN READING TO SAY DKJASHDKJADHAKJAHASDHAKJASAJSHJAKJDAHDKJASJHAJKSDHAKJDHAKJHASKJAHSDJKAHDKJADHKJAHASKJJASHDJAKJADHHASJAJHJASKJDAS

IS THIS WHAT I THINK IT IS IS IT IS IT IS IT IS IT IS IT KJASDHAKJHSKJASHDJASHDKJAHKJADHAKJDASHKJDAHKJSDHAKJDHASKJHAS

to be honest i was kind of lost and engaged in you the first time it appeared on my author's feed SO KJASHASKJHAKJAHKASHJAKJA SENPPPAAAAAAIIIIII OMFG OMFG OMFG I HAVEEN'T EVEN READ THIS YET BUT EVERYTHING ALREADY SOUNDS SO PERFECTTTTT???

fffffff- plus it's LHyun AND HAVE I TOLD YOU HOW MUCH I SHIP THIS //shot

I CANNOT. I CANNOT CANNOT CANNOT CANNOT SKJDHAKJDASHJDAJKJDAS

WHAT THE ACTUAL STAR; WHAT THE ACTUAL I AM FANGIRLING OVER A DESCRIPTION AND FOREWORD AND MY SENPAI WHO WRITES REALLY BEAUTIFULLY WRITING MY OTP OMFG OMFG OMFG OMFG I CANNNOTTTTTT