A Wistful Farewell

Description

CHARACTERS (alphabetical order):

Jung Yunho

Kwon BoA

Lee Yeonhee

Oh Sehun

Shim Changmin

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Cho Kyuhyun

Lee Jinki (Onew)

Park Sun Young (Luna)

Seo Joohyun (Seohyun)

Wu Yi Fan (Kris)

(+ Others as story develops)

 

“I don’t know what they are called, the spaces between seconds– but I think of you always in those intervals.” 
― 
Salvador PlascenciaThe People of Paper

 

EXCERPT:

“I knew all along that you would leave me.”

He didn't have to look at her to know that she was crying. Taking a deep breath to calm his heart, he turned to face her. His face was void of any emotion, “You're better off without me, BoA. He has loved you and done so much more for you than I have. I'm sorry, but I just don't feel the same way about you anymore.”

Her expression was hard to read and he could only guess what was going through her mind. 

“You're always like this. You always place yourself second when it came to him.”

"That's because I know that I am second."

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Author's Note:

I'm terrible at writing chaptered-fics, but to HELL WITH IT. 

I'm still trying to figure out the pairings for all the characters so any suggestions? 'Cause I don't know who to pair Onew with at all! LOL. 

Oh, does anyone know where I can request a poster from?   Credits to Eyes2Blues for the amazing poster <3

Anyways, I shall update soon. ^_^

Tee123
I'll update soon :)

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impeccableduizhang
#1
Chapter 2: i just reread this and i have a feeling you'll update soon ;)

also, another human being have been enlightened and seen the perfection that is the hunboa ship. the comment before this made me sooo happy.
D-Hime #2
Chapter 2: Omg! Nooooooo! Why? Why must you stop at the most interesting part!? Nuuuuuh! You can't do this to us! I need to see Sehun get jealous! Or maybe go protective of BoA! My SehunBoA! My babiesss!!! Hehehehe. :3

When will you be back? I hope soon. We really need to see the next chapter. Your fans needs you, authornim! Hehe. ^_^V i love all the characters you put so far! Aww. So cute all of them! Seohyun is such an adorable lil sis. What a teaser. Hehe.

Sehun deserves the Queen! Sehun-ah, fight for your love! Don't let her get away! Hahahahaha. I'm a really huge crackshipper of SehunBoA. I dunno. The chemistry is REAL. Sadly, only a miracle can bring them together in real life. T^T anyway, i hope they end up together even if just in this fic. Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of gold! :) fighting! ^_^
corinneniix
#3
Judging from the characters there'll be seokyu and minhee too right!!!!! I love both of those ships ahhhh
corinneniix
#4
Chapter 2: Yunho's appearance!!!!!!! Dramatic appearance!!!!!!! Hahaha ahh I love seohyun here. So different from out usual but still very cute ^^ pls come back to aff??? And update this???
eyes2blues
#5
Chapter 2: OH MY GAAAWWWDDD TEEEEE!!!!! YOU ARE BACCCKKKK!!!! OMG OMG OMG!!!!!! I MISSED YOU SO SOOOOO MUUUCCCHHH! I DON'T EVEN GO TO AFF ANYMORE COZ YOU'RE NOT AROUNDDD BUT THIS!!! THIS COMEBACK THOOO!!!! OMGOMGOMG!!!!!

But the freakin' ending tho!!! Such a cliff hanger! Why would you do this to meeeehhh!!! But I love it! I LOVE IT!!!!! I love the struggle she's going through with Sehun and Yunho and OMG!!! Dying here right now! Somebody hold me!!!!!

HAHA!!!

Surpried with Seohyun's characterization here but it's nice to see her like this. So refreshing. And this is so cool that you didn't have to drag the story :3 Just the right narration and suspense in the end. Gawd!!!! I know this is prolly asking too much but I hope you can update soon! Hihi!!!

But the fact that you didn't forget about this story is good enough.

Really missed you!
rubytinny #6
Chapter 2: This fanfic is sooooo cool
Look forward to the next chap
VEESWAG
#7
Chapter 2: OMGGGGGGG WHYYYYYYY MY SEBOA FEELS ANDTHEN YUNHO SHOWS UP OMOMOMOMOMO
impeccableduizhang
#8
Chapter 2: (another continuation.) OTL


Sehun reminded her of him.
“At least tell me he’s better than Yunho!” It was almost like he was begging her.

It sounded like Yunho did something to hurt her feelings tremendously and she is not yet over her. She thinks about him still, and she even sees qualities of Yunho at Sehun. Yunho was/is a big part of her life and he threw that away and… What did you do?? How dare he break BoA’s heart! Shheesshh!

….the familiar soft smile, the sharp features on his face, and the tall muscular build….

/ehem
muscular? Lol. Was that a jab at Sehun’s skinny body?



/SCREAMS AGAIN

I can’t wait for the next update because this was a cliffhanger! How would BoA react with Yunho around and how would Sehun continue the date? Why must you do this to my poor kokoro Sunbae!
I’ll wait for you to elaborate on “Yunho-BoA: What really happened”. I hope he didn’t cheat because that just… ugh!
I’m so glad you updated this. I hope you aren’t too busy anymore!
I am excited for the other characters too! Many weren’t still mentioned so, I am looking forward to all the love stories to unfold.
I am more excited than ever!!

PS. I’m sorry for spamming you with a comment that is annoyingly messy (and long.) But I love you! (you already know that!)

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impeccableduizhang
#9
Chapter 2: continuation (because I exceeded. OTL)

Seohyun is the best dongsaeng here. LOL. I don’t know why but I love siblings who bicker-at-each-other-but-not-really-and-they-really-love-each-other-very-much.


So maybe Seohyun wasn’t being dramatic because she was currently standing in front of Sehun and he did have a stupid grin on his face. Well, not stupid but moreso adorable. Sehun looked at her as if she was the most beautiful woman in the world….
“Y-you look beautiful.”

/cries
You perfectly described Sehun every time he dances Only One with BoA. Aww. The ‘adorable/stupid’ grin he has and the way he looks at BoA like she is the most precious thing he laid his eyes upon. Like, those few seconds of holding her face means the world to him.

And there is Seohyun being a bratty one. “Wow, you’re already dying seeing her in this simple dress, imagine her in a wedding dress!” LOL. Can I just hug Seohyun for saying that?!?!


“Who did you come here with before? Girlfriend?”
“Why? Jealous?”

Hopeful Sehun is hopeful. I like Sehun tried really hard to impress her. Dressed in a dressed shirt and went to the best restaurant! Way to go Sehun!
impeccableduizhang
#10
Chapter 2: /SCREAMS

/SPEWS RAINBOWS AND SPARKLES

Sunbae, why wasn’t there even a warning before hand, hey I might upload chapter? I basically had a heart attack and squealed in so much delight!!! But boy, it’s one of the best things to wake up to! LOL.


Not necessarily like the dead type of doomed, but more like the ‘falling in love’ type of doomed.
“So, there’s this guy… And I may or may not be interested in him.”

Please please please BoA don’t be scared to fall in love with Sehunnie here in the fic! (also irl, if possible!) LOL. Sehun will take care of you! (I promise upon the Sehun’s rainbow hair.)


...but he would always stumble upon his words and just give up.

LOL. I bet is like that everytime BoA is around.


I like Onew as the best friend, so caring and protective of her. Since she doesn’t have a brother to that for her. And Changmin being a Voldimin and suspecting things between Onew and BoA’s platonic relationship. Who said boys and girls couldn’t simply be friends? Oh… that’s right. Shim Changmin. Just you Min, just you!!