Chapter 1: Smokers can watch those pretty trails of smoke floating around them on a daily basis...i envy them.
Your story is really nice, it gives off that heavy, burdening feeling that seems to resemble what those two feel...:3 i like it a lot.^^ these scenes would work really well on a black-and-white setting with some jazz music playing on the background or something cliche like that.:3
Chapter 1: Wow... I really thought Onew would jump when Minho opened the door.
This is very good, but I hope this is not how they feel, especially Onew.
If this is one of your shortest, I would for sure read the others ^.^
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