♥ Baby, Don't Cry

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Description

Our story begins at an underwater kingdom. You are a spirited little mermaid who lives with your father (the sea King), your grandmother (the said wisest mermaid), and your five sisters. You are also the youngest amongst your sisters but not any less adventurous and curious. Seeing all your sisters venture to the surface, you can only yearn to be able to go there yourself. Once you get the chance to, you encounter a guy that literally flips your whole world upside down. What happens when you fall in love with him? What will you be willing to do to spend the rest of your life with him? Will you be able to get your desired happily ever after or will you be too late...

As you can see from the title, we were inspired by EXO's song, Baby, Don't Cry, to write the story of The Little Mermaid with our own lil twist. This story will have ideas from both the orignial and the disney version of The Little Mermaid, and our own fantasies/imaginations :D still not convinced to read this? check out our story review below :)

Foreword

~please do not plagiarize~ also warning: first few chapters are rather short

 

Characters:

You (Ariel): the little mermaid who has always longed to see the surface of the ocean

              

                                                                   Kyungsoo: the lonely prince who has always longed for that special someone

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Flounder: the best friend that stands by you no matter what

Annabelle: the princess who coincidentally finds the prince lying near the shore

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Ursula: the manipulative and deceptive magical creature who expects a return for every action

Luhan: ??? (it's a secret ^.^)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Posters:

credits to Vleenie for the lovely poster                          credits to Shineebabyexotic for this wonderful poster

                

Date Started: June 23, 2013

Date Completed: October 24, 2013

 

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please excuse the first few crappy chapters. we are both newbies in writing fanfiction :) lastly, we hope you'll enjoy our first ever story! happy reading~

♥ bubbletealover35

Check out my other stories:

The Reality After Five Years - starring Luhan, OC (one-shot/completed)

It's for the Best - starring Luhan, OC (one-shot/completed)

Only You - starring Luhan, Sehun, OC (on-going)

bubbletealover35
it's 11.12.13 today :) dats all

Comments

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Faedra
#1
I like the adaptation although it isn't entirely an adaptation, I love it. I read this a long time ago. And stopped at some point, never getting to finish. I hope to finish reading this very soon! I especially like the way you included their songs into your story.
Squishysoo_12
#2
Chapter 39: Im late but this is beautiful
Sonja_Nguyen #3
Gonna read this ^^
bteasuga
#4
Chapter 4: luhan?where is prince Luhan?
AeSunset
#5
Chapter 39: Oh my,I love it!!! Thank you so much for writing it..its amazing,wonderful and asdfghjkl..good job and keep it up!!!
SNSD1203 #6
Chapter 36: OMG! I almost cried when she died!..Felt as if one member in exo had to write this chapter it would DEFINITELY be Chen!..you're so cruel
sukasuka #7
Chapter 19: what is an eskimo kiss? :3 enjoy reading it so far but I feel bad for Luhan.... I hope she gets her voice back soon!
CatarinaDKS13
#8
Chapter 39: Oh . My . Dear . Lord .
You don't even imagine how much I love this story . I read it in one go and seriously , I regret nothing .
to be honest , I almost cried when Ariel "died" . Damn . I thought she was gone for good and I was so , but so sad .
and also , this fic has Kyungsoo as the male lead and . Just . he's my ultimate , ULTIMATE bias . I just love this .
I love you , chinja , forever .
this story is just beautiful . and that happy ending , OH GOD OH GOD TT-TT I CANNOT HOLD THE FEELS ANYMORE I CANNOT- *drowns in feels*
you guys , I sarang you *sobs* TT-TT
imanina #9
Chapter 10: Awwww luhan :--(
Jazzilollies #10
I L.O.V.E THIS BOOK! YOU SHOULD SERIOUSLY MAKE A MOVIE OR SOMETHING... only if you could... BUT ANYWAYS I LOVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE THIS BOOK!