Metanoia

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"You're weak now. Your heart has been stolen by a human."

"Well, I'm not the only one, Am I?" The man shrugged, smirked, and that smirk had a lot of meanings.

Then he leaned, and raised one brow. "We're in the same boat, bro."

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Foreword

 

She ran as fast as she could without looking back, she could feel their desire of killing her.

No one but her.

She doesn't know why.

And that what makes the things worse, that no matter what will she do, they will definitely find her.

Her mind had stopped, this time it wasn’t a dream or a fancy.

It got real.

she really couldn't think of anything else, running was the only thing she could do.

She lost her mom and her father for that. 

She tried to tell someone, but no one believed her. 

Everyone thought she was hallucinating. Of course, she is too young to lose both her parents and the circumstances of her parents' work worsened thing for her.

That's what people think. 

The strange thing is that this has happened many times and she has ended up sleeping in her bed calmly, not remembering how she got here.

Every freaking night. Nearly.

It's the scenario of her life after saving that guy.

No, it all did exactly happen after saving two guys' lives.

At first, she thought if a small change happens to change her boring and blank life, it will be something great and exciting for sure. However, she changed her mind.

Now she's dying to get her ious life back.

But how can she get it back? It is like asking for travelling to the moon with a car. 

Something that is impossible. 

What happened wasn’t even close to what she has imagined her future life will be after her father's been murdered and her mother's sudden disappearance. 

 

 

Created: 02-06-2013
Inspired by: - Exo's new album especially "Let Out the beast"
- Exo's Drama Music Video

 

 

 

AN: I really worked hard on this story, so please support me.

Author's Thoughts
PHEY__
Changed the title, finally. I wished to do this for more than a year.
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Lolypop123 #1
Chapter 39: Update if u can ^3^
aqualili #2
Chapter 46: you tag harem right??? so i don't understand why would you ask who she end up with??? anyway love your story even though its frustrating at some point
vanesagermanotta #3
Jongin or suho.. Suho's her teacher right?
LIUtheSONE #4
Chapter 46: Can she end with all? Cuz harem is good :3
Hiyeppi #5
Please update soon. I reread this story and I really like it. I can't wait and I'm really curious about what the other chapters are going to be about. Thx and keep up the good work!
VivianaExo12 #6
Chapter 38: I'm a INFJ
bobjo1913 #7
Chapter 45: Honestly i think the all the ttitle options r cheesy....and revealing the story too much

I agree it being confusing. I think its bcuz theres so much going on and all Daran is doing getting dizzy
bobjo1913 #8
Her name is so funny. U kno it means very long, tivht? Lmao
PhoebeOHNO #9
Chapter 45: Part 2

I know were still in the introductory phase. I mean, we're not even in the part when her father gets murdered (you said this in the foreward). So I'm confident that we're still in the exposition part of the story. And honestly? I'm happy. I'm happy that we're still in the start of the story and there's already so much stuff going on. We still have 5 members left to introduce, excluding the fact that Kai and Lay still haven't said a single line. And I'm expecting more to happen and more to be revealed. I'm kind confused because there's nothing much revealed, but I'm eager to wait for the revelations to come.

About the title, "That's Right I'm a Wolf" doesn't seem to do justice to the mystery that your story offers. My high school teacher once said that in a story, the title should embody the whole concept of the book. I'm not too sure about "Cure or Kill" and "The Antidote". Both seem too direct and straightforward - a contrary to your strange and mysterious story. Did that make sense? Sorry if I can't help you in choosing.

And I really don't mind if there's no romance yet. I think that the development in the story is much more interesting.

But anyways, you're doing a good job. I like it. Although a lot of people seem to loose interest because of the slow pacing, I think they will come back when we're somehow near the rising action or the . So don't loose heart.

Good job! Thanks for the good story and update ;)
PhoebeOHNO #10
Chapter 45: Part 1

Hi I'm a new reader. Before answering the your question in changing the title, I would like to share my thoughts about the story first.

First of all, I'm really pissed at her mom. Like I really can't stand that she manages to act so indenial and nonchalant about other things, then act so concerned and worried about other things. It's like she's manipulating everything and it pisses me off that our OC is dancing under that spell.

Second, I wish Daran wasn't so clueless. She is a strong girl and she is not entirely helpless. I like that she is trying to adapt to things like how she wants to act normal when she hear the thoughts. And I like that because that shows character development. But the pacing of the story has put Daran as an ignorant damsel.

Now, though all my comment above are all negative thoughts, please don't be disheartenend. It just means that your story is good. Because you got all my feelings riled up. Because you had me wanting a development to happen. And when you're reader wants a development in the story means that you got her hooked. And I really am absorbed with this story! It's good!
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