Monsters: The Mousetrap

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Kapre, a creature of fire in Philippine mythology. He looks human but his pipe is seducing.

He can choose to lure women to their fates just by smell, he lures them to their fates.

He has a belt to remain invisible and avoids being caught by humans.

But who is causing him to lure young beautiful women? And what do they want with them?

A mousetrap. A lure of delicious smelling food that humans use to lure mice and rats out of their hiding place. Its springs are blind and aren't biased.

And what happens to these women once caught? 


Author's Note:
here is another one of my unni's biases ;D
Lol Kiki :) hehe :3
Hope you enjoy this ^^V

 

Foreword

Hana munched on her strawberry Danish while looking over the case file she put together.

She had just finished some witness questioning, and they had all reported the same thing.

They all had a sweet scent left behind from where their friends disappeared.

One girl had stopped quickly into a convenience store and her friend waited for her outside but once she came out, she was gone.

Hana took another bite of the Danish and pondered the thought. Was it really possible for a sweet scent to be left behind after a person's disappearance?

The only problem was that the smell seemed to differ from witness to witness.

One said blueberries, another said warm vanilla, and one even said strawberries.

But with all the different stories, it was getting hard to believe that there was even a scent there.

Hana looked over the reports once again, she couldn't believe that so many girls were going missing, and they never seemed to appear again.

Where were they heading off to? Where were they being kept?

What if they never really disappeared at all?

Her cell phone rang and she finished the last bite of her pastry before answering.

"Hello?"

It was the call she dreaded, another girl went missing.

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Hana had walked the street, without realizing that the sky had grow dark on her.

She walked down an alleyway and tried to find clues as to where the last girl had disappeared to.

She had found nothing, but as she continued walking she felt the lure.

The witnesses hadn't been lying, she could tell, there was a very distinct scent of strawberries in the air and that was also her favorite smell.

As her mind connected the dots, she figured that maybe the girls had been smelling their favorite scents as well, that's why their reactions were all different.

"Damn." She cursed under her breath, walking into something she couldn't see.

She knew it what this meant.

She would be the next to go.

The Spiderweb | The Mousetrap | The Vortex | The Thunderstorm | The Underground | The Crossover


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Disclaimer: I do not own Kikwang, Seungyub or any other cameos in this story. I only own my original character and the plotline. Some inspiration from Beauty and the Beast fairytale. Any similarities to other stories, books, etc are purely coincidence.

 

Started: August 15th, 2013.

Finished: June 12th, 2014.

 
Rianne2580
Mousetrap: this story is almost done :D I'm like so close... But I hope you enjoy the coming updates~

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0330-TBA
#1
Chapter 27: CH 25: Whoa that was some monster there. Anna~~~~ TT____________________________________TT But now time to find out some secrets and be reunited with Seungyub too~~ <3

CH 26: Sad to see it end~~ TT______________TT But it was SO DANG good~!!! <3 <3 <3 Really did love this!! :D Now onto Khun~~~ <3 Thank you SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUUUUUCCCHHHH~~~~~ <3 Love you~~~~~ Hehehe Seungyub got the hint XDDDDD
0330-TBA
#2
Chapter 25: I accidentally deleted the comments up until this point!!!! WAAAHHHHHH~~~!!!! TT_________TT

CH 15: WOO~~~!!!! THEY'RE TALKING!!!!! YEEEAAAAHHHH~~~~ XD But 15 people??? Dang! I didn't even know that many girls were taken :O

CH 16: She finally figured it all out! Woo!! But Anna... Where'd she go TT_______TT AHH!!!! She CAME!!! WAHHHHHHHH~~!!!

Ch 17: Yoshi~! Heard everything now just have to figure out how to beat the little witch. *fist pump* Poor Kiki though~ That must really sting every time he hears that from her (That he's the real monster). Crazy crazy stuff right there~!!!

CH 18: Whoa! He's SO caring~~ <3 <3 <3 <3 ADORABLE~~!!!!! Looks like things are progressing~~~ }:D (Hahahah XD Your inner battle XDD SO FUNNY!!! XDDD)

CH 19: Now she's using her as a threat to make Kiki go and do the dirty job?!?!?!?! What the H man. That's not cool. She gonna get her kicked~ >:| *On a side not super great to see how close they are getting now }:D

CH 20: WOO~~!! Figured out like everything I'm pretty sure! PLUS~ Got to still be in the same cell as KIKI!!!!! AHHH!!!!! So happy!!!!! (HAHAHAHA XD It's ok~~~ Even without it'll be amazing~~~!! XD

CH 21: Awwh man! He heard the last part?? TT______TT I llooooovvveee yoooouuuuuu <3 Hehehe. Yay for Kiki x Hana action~~!!!

CH 22: OMAGAWSHH!!!!! Just like aisdhlkadskfnkaljdslkgjaklsdngkanksdf. CAN NOT EVEN. Just died. Legit died. WAHH!!!!!!! (Now waiting anxiously to see what a white rose means)

Ch 23: Yeaahh~~~~ He just picked her up and boom. Taken care of. XD SOOOOO Excited to see where this will go~~!!!

CH 24: THEY KISSED~~~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Then the old hag left and now the girls are back to normal~~ HEY!! Maybe they'll find Anna!!! Oh, maybe she was in a different cell??!?! Wait. Or maybe... idk. I'll wait XD
0330-TBA
#3
Chapter 9: CH 1: WAHH!!!!!! THIS IS ALREADY SO FREAKIN' COOL!!!!! WAHHH!!!!! Psh! Lame-o cops! Why ain't you doing your dang job?!!? Leaving it all to Seungyub and I. PSH!! But we can do a better job anyways :P DOJOON!!! WAHHH!!! I feel like I am seriously going to die during these series. Like OMGosh. Just dying and nothing really has even happened yet oh man. orz *fangirling too hard probs*

CH 2: So smart. Keeping the door in view at all times. Also making sure that no one can sneak up from behind. WOO! Awe, Yuri seems really sad! D; Glad to be helping out :) I wonder if that guy has any connection :O

CH 3: Whoa!! They're slowly finding out more and more!! Woo!!!! :) Seungyub is such a great helper/friend!! <3 FRIES~~~!!

CH 4: Her friend got taken too?!?!?! This guy is crazy!!! So sad TT_________TT Man Seungyub is insane! Super amazing!!!!! YAY FOR INVESTIGATING~~~~! XD

CH 5: I honestly have no idea either XD I have the same questions! XD AH! The guy man. Must be SUPER smart to just grab that many people and throw the police off that much so that they don't investigate :/

CH 6: ANOTHER ONE?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! Cube Ent..... Hmm..... Hyuna?! PS, I'm starting to want to eat one of those XD Sounds so delicious~~~

CH 7: DANG IT! It was Gayoon... I was close though XD Yoseob?? Poor Yoseob~! But really he's taken a girl a lot faster than before and now has taken a girl that was in a relationship. Boom. Things have changed plus the theories to the questions before have changed too I'm sure XD (Oh and your dancing is way good!!!)

CH 8: WHOA! This is so cool!! Dream revelation!!! Like everything during her dream is helping her out! And maybe even that guy has some meaning!!! WOOOOAAAAAHHH!! OH! And I see what you did there with Hyosung and secret XDDD (Everyone is so pretty. They're all good at dancing)
sam098 #4
Chapter 27: Wow! You are so awesome!!! I love yhis story!!
Do you wrote pther Beast stories too??
kpopfanforever77
#5
Chapter 26: You gave hints about the guy and girl convo?! i didnt even catch it!
Lyli21 #6
Chapter 27: I really enjoy this story so much. you bring my mood high and down author-nim. keep writing.
luv_kero
2442 streak #7
Chapter 27: I've really enjoyed reading this story and the mystery has kept me on my toes since I first subscribed! ^-^ You're a great story-teller, with your subtle hints sprinkled throughout the chapters. It's been a rollercoaster of a ride, trying to figure out all (or at least most, haha) of the secrets in this story. Ki Kwang is such a sweetheart and I'm so glad he's got a happy ending now! x] Kudos to you for a great job and I'm excited to read the next installment with Nichkhun! :)