Hold My Heart

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Description

An angst story full of love and hate.

Vendettas, accidents, murderers.

All are involved.

Everybody knows something.

Everybody hides a secret.

But only one is responsible for the chaos!

 

Foreword

He managed to hold him back and they almost fell on the ground. When he was free from his friend's tight grip, his hands grabbed his hair and he bent slightly down regretting what he did. When he went up straight the tears were streaming down. His breath came out in harsh pants and sobs. He couldn't take the pain anymore and turned to the wall punching it.

''N-No! Stop! You'll hurt yourself!'' The latter ignored everyone's pleads. No one could understand him. It was his fault that things ended up this way. He blamed himself for not being there to hold her. Right that moment he needed to feel something to overcome his mental pain.

Nothing worked. Nothing was compared to the pain of his heart. The elder held him from his shoulders but he kept pushing him away. Only when he felt the bone cracking he was satisfied enough to stop.

When he finally stopped beating himself up he saw the blood on the wall from his cut knuckles. A strong sob came out and his back warped down as he lowered to the floor.

He could also hear his friend's cries next to him telling him not to accuse himself. His forehead touched the hard and cold cement and his eyes closed.

''I broke my promise. My angel is gone!''

 

TRAILER

 

Venni_aboveTheSun
Yeah I change the foreward because the first one pretty much and didn't fit the concept.

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lajcjcalckmd #1
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khinweaye #2
Chapter 12: I hope you'll find some time to continue with this story as I've been following it for so long and still don't know who's the person at the funeral of Lyn's mother and sibling. I'm But thank not even sure why U-Now has appeared in her dream and maybe he's that evil one??? I know you're going to be very busy but I just hope and pray you'll be able to spare an hour or two every other week so that we faithful fans won't be left hanging in the air as we wonder what happens to Lyn and Yongup... But thanks for the latest update though, quite and unexpected, but makes for enjoyable reading...
carolinaprincess26 #3
Chapter 8: Very good,can't wait for the update.
Phi_Phi #4
Chapter 5: Nightmare by 2YOON

This song is one of my favourites, it has some deep lyrics and is quite emotional, slightly fast but still a ballad in some form, I think it also fits the story very well, especially as the first dance she did was 4MINUTE which witnessed the reunion of B.A.P with Lynn and her friends. c:
Xianni #5
That foreword was so.. intriguing :D
kejt21 #6
Chapter 4: yeeaa i'm excited, what will happend next?
Update <3
Claudine_NG #7
Chapter 3: Please update soon!
CrystalizedAmber #8
Chapter 1: interesting so far....