TaeNy Oneshot [M] Completed!

by DarthVader
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Just some TaeNy loving.

My first ever that i wrote half a year ago and i'm finally sharing it.

 

There are definitely some errors in it.


Foreword

The members are gone. Taeyeon and Tiffany definitely wouldn't miss this chance to be together.


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Badkiddo () says about chapter 1:
Wohooo so hot and y, love it keke
I wish the person between fany legs was me lol

aznphoenix95 () says about chapter 1:
Only error I can point out is the change in person, for example you write 'She does this', but then you aslso write 'you do this', stick either 'she' or 'you', using both makes it both jarring and grammatically incorrect. Other than that, it was great. The pacing was good and I loved how much attention to paid to the smaller intimate details like the foreheads
touching and the out of breath murmurs and the nails raking. Not bad for a first time, definitely nothing to be embarrassed about when there are so much more worse stuff floating around from apparently 'good' authors.

S0NES0SHii () says about chapter 1:
Omg that was freakung awsome!! ♥
Dont be embarrassed. *inhaler* *breath*

Lol nosebleed haha

Natkougi () says about chapter 1:
JUST--- JUST--
Don't be embarrassed, you're AWESOME! Please, write moaaar! *cries in absolute happiness*

ianalvarez () says about chapter 1:
OMG I Cant Breathe
Cool Fiction And Do more Of taeny fanfics!

ianalvarez () says about chapter 1:
OMG I Cant Breathe
Cool Fiction And Do more Of taeny fanfics!

ianalvarez () says about chapter 1:
OMG I Cant Breathe
Cool Fiction And Do more Of taeny fanfics!

miimms () says about chapter 1:
breathtaking! @.@ I need air!!

OMG I loved your writing *.*
really, congrats!! So but so good, Amazing!!

keep writing!!
Taeny is so perfect here!!

QisthinaLocksmith () says about chapter 1:
LOL it's Okay and sooooooo good so nice start!! TaeNy is so hot and y T^T
Thank you for make it TaeNy <333 ^^

TaeNy is so lovely sweet romantic and adorable ^__^ <3

Keep writing on fiction! Especially TaeNy's fic ;D

Love my TaeNy <333

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