Broken Coda

Description

"Coda is a term used in music in a number of different senses, primarily to designate a passage that brings a piece (or one movement thereof) to a conclusion. Occurs at the end of a composition and traditionally brings the composition to a convincing conclusion." -Benward & Saker, 2009
Broken Coda is hence; an unfinished conclusion.

Foreword




MOIRA TRINITÉ
Yumi_Jae.Velvet.Heaven
(of Skydragon-Kingdom forums)

 

“All good things come in threes”.
Past, Present, Future. Chronos, Kairos, Pleroma


Moira Trinité is the name we have adopted and we will be using as we go along the chapters of this fiction. It’s a name that best represented who we are, three (TRINITY or in French Trinité) pretty heads who weave in the exciting and sometimes poignant course of each of the character’s FATE (Moira) and destiny.

The inside scoop on it though is we were playing with various names and couldn’t let go of the word Trinity, since for obvious reasons, the word represented: three points, three persons, three things which could be very well associated with us coz there’s three of us. We tried Trinity in several languages, including Filipino, Malay, Hebrew and Turkish but it didn’t sound quite right. Then Velvet came up with the French translation of it trinité, complete with an accent. Once again, we were bowled over by the iness and classiness of the French language so we ended up with TRINITÉ. MOIRA came because it reminded us of the three goddesses of fate in Greek mythology.

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'Broken Coda' by MOIRA TRINITÉ

Genre/Theme: Romance, drama
Rating: PG 13

Started: May 19th, 2011
Completed: August 27th, 2011
Status: Completed

 

"Coda is a term used in music in a number of different senses, primarily to designate a passage that brings a piece (or one movement thereof) to a conclusion. Occurs at the end of a composition and traditionally brings the composition to a convincing conclusion." -Benward & Saker, 2009


Broken Coda is hence; an unfinished conclusion.

 

Broken Coda is the latest work of Moira Trinite; a threefour-part short story about love, insecurity and inevitable mistakes.

I hope you'll enjoy this new piece of ours. ;)

 

Signing off,

Yumi.

 

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blackwonderer #1
Chapter 4: beautiful as always~
i got the same problem with her, thought of him as too perfect n i am no match for him so i felt small n distance to him. beautiful ending, if only i got the same ending too but no he just left TTATT
G_D_IS_MY_BIG_BRO #2
Chapter 4: Omg I loved this, I was thinking all the way through that bit, shiz hopefully this doesn't end up a hit and run and Jiyong crying hold chaerin TT_TT and thankfully it didnt
lingfan #3
this was amazing.
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skytothedragon04 #4
. . . Good thing there was no traffic . . .

I'll shut up now .
solielLune #5
A very sad story indeed. Nicely done.
dorothy #6
your story is really amazing. i always cry whenever i read this story :)
springtempo #7
one word BEAUTIFUL...in every possible way..i salute you
Fadedmoonlight #8
I...... I'm honestly beyond speechless. Of all my eighteen years on this earth, that, my dear readers, was the most beautiful and magical thing i have ever read. I truly envy you twofer having auh a way with words. Indeed, the plot was simple, but the way you made us understood what she was going through, their pain, their devotion, everything... It wad just so unreal. So beautiful. <br />
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Thank you. Thank you forever for inspiring me. This is honesty the best thing I have ever read. Thank youfor the multitude of emotions that your story allowed me to feel. <br />
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Thank you. Thank you so much for writing something beautiful as this. Please write again soon (another skydragon)
velvetmauve #9
@cl_jiD, this is Vel, co-author of Broken Coda. :) You actually have my gratitude for pointing this out in the story; "If you think about it they wouldn't have gone through all this if she just didn't feel so "lonely" and if the greed for something more or if she didn't degrade herself". Hmmm, while we were writing the story we had this concept in mind, the imperfection of human reason. I think in the end, no one could stop one's self for being lonely, no one can stop one's self from feeling insecure and sometimes lacking. These ugly things are part of human nature, something we cannot disconnect from ourselves. <br />
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Sometimes love is just as convoluted, sometimes we just cant help it. It's a paradox; but that doesn't mean our lack of understanding will immediately erase our feelings. Our actions, whether our overreaction or lack of reaction doesn't always appear like it's the rational choice and it's part of loving. Love is not linear. We try to attribute love to the most beautiful things like happiness, devotion, fidelity, passion, but love can also exist in despair, in pain and in heartbreak. It was ultimately what we were trying to point out, and I'm glad you raised a point about it. :) and thank you very much for suggesting a sequel! We'll keep that in mind!
cl_jiD #10
If you think about it they wouldn't have gone through all this if she just didn't feel so "lonely" and if the greed for something more or if she didn't degrade herself buuuut at least they're okay now..... good thing jingyo's love was really strong..... I mean man for three years, that must've hurt like hell! It was a nice story.... would love to see like just a one shot extension of this fic wherein it tackles about their strong love after this all this havoc because in all four chapters of this fic three and a half(haha) of them are really all heartbreaking.... I would love to see them happily in love for even just one full chapter hahahahahaha but anyway at least she learned the mistake she made and he, though man that's got to be really hard, accepted her back. Thanks for the fic!
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