let's start it over (from the top)

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we met at the wrong time. that's what i keep telling myself anyway. maybe one day years from now, we'll meet in a coffee shop in a far away city somewhere and we could give it another shot.

Foreword

[A/N] this goes out to everyone who likes luyoon. dedicated to rochelle (oneoftheboys) who is an avid fawn, but an even lovelier friend. you know i can't write, but okay, i'll try. :)

 

Poster credit goes to nexttimeisnotthesame! :)

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lannisters #1
Chapter 1: well my hEART HAS BEEN SHATTERED THEN PUT BACK TOGETHER????

now excuse me while I cRY AT THE PERFECTION OF THIS

ugh the way you portrayed luHAN WAS PERf can u like not


idek what I'm saying anymore but this story was perfecto! ♡
aetherius #2
Chapter 1: This is so beautiful.
That's honestly all I can say.
Rather than just have feels for a pairing this story really touched me with the literature and meaning in it. The story itself wasn't another burdensome, dramatic, or tragic fanfic but a really heart-touching inspiring one that really gave so much more meaning to love <3
I admit to teary eyes at the end of this fic and I really think this story was a breath of fresh air in comparison to many stories I've been reading XDD
Great oneshot<3 I'm definitely bound to read it again ahaha ^^
glowbug #3
Chapter 1: aksjdhglkasjdhfloajsdhfloasjdhfolasuhdfoluashdf
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oh my god luyooN
THANK YOU FOR REKINDLING MY ONCE BURIED LUYOON FLAMES
but srsly this fic was really really beautiful and sweet and just ughhhhhH <33
Vicky_Zeng #4
Chapter 1: AWWWWWWWWWWW such an amazing story :') Luyoon is just such eyecandy together <3
oneoftheboys #5
CARISSA DARLING, I-- (prepare your body for an incoherent comment)
this is utterly beautiful. As much as I love full-on angst, I am also a er for underdogs, and this story with Luhan and Yoona's love as the underdog, or the unlikely outcome, just killed me like omg I read it four times alr. I love love love how you describe Luhan's admiration of her (let's face it, everyone loves Luhan pining over Yoona) and his character-- I know you were worried about the whole canon thing being messed up by recent events, but I think if anything, Luhan's character makes up for it -- he is genuine and sincere, and that's always been my image of what Luhan irl would be like.
I love the simplicity of this, too; it's real in the sense that you tell things as they happen, and I know your word for that is 'rushed', but my word for it is 'perfect'
I also love the lines "sounding broken and sad and everything luhan hates" and "...there aren't any stars in the sky that night because that very same night, the star he wished upon their forever had fallen"
do you hear my heart shattering
thank you so much bby for dedicating this to me, too! <3 I LOVE YOU RISSA 69EVER YEAH
ararearaya #6
Chapter 1: i've been waiting for the update and have no regret at all to do so. this story is just... beautiful. i love how you tell their relationship's progress by everytime luhan sees her. and i reaaaally love how you write luhan's character in here. eventhough i do not know how he acts in real life, i think he'll respect and love yoona (despite the fact that yoong's dating seunggi, now) like the way you write it.
it's really beautiful story. loooooove it. hope you write luyoon more. :3
ShaMusume #7
Chapter 1: This is sweet..seriously sweet..hope u can make a new story about them again ^^
oneoftheboys #8
I AM STILL SUPER EXCITED FOR THIS, OKAY.
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