Perfect World

Description

I am posting this story in this site.This is my second Jiro and Hebe story....that I have written a long time ago......I don't think I did a great job writing this cause I have some sort of uninspired moments towards the middle of the story.This has a lot of drama than I intended to be.I am suppose to touch on the social issues of the society,but I think I went somewhere else.But still I hope you guys give this story a chance,cause in all the impossibility comes the possibility......

Foreword

Everybody wants to live in a Perfect World.But what is exactly a perfect world.No chaos,everything is in order,no dirt,no germs,no diseases,no sickness and no death.No loneliness,no heartache,no tears,no violence,no crimes and no sorrows.Sounds to good to be true.But if we live in the perfect world,are we not suppose to be perfect?

Is being perfect beautiful?Is it even real or reachable,even for the not so perfect people like us?But they say the imperfections is what makes the world beautiful.Then why do we aim for perfect world?

Some people are exposed to the imperfections of this beautiful world on day one of their life.Some will never learn that it ever existed.Some will find it out later in life.

Some people will move mountains to make our world perfect.Some will just accept the imperfections that it will offer.Some will fight to their last breathe to attain the perfect world.

Character:
Jiro Wang-a man of the world.He was exposed to the hard
realities of life at an early age.A warrior and
a survivor,he knows to fight the odds without
losing himself.He have to choose between the
past and the present.but how can he turn his back
on the present when she gave up everything for
him.

Hebe Tian-beautiful ,rich,she have everything going for her
she is living in the perfect world.She can have
anything and everything she wants,but she choose
the impossible.She gave up the perfect world for
the man she loves.

Selina Ren-beatiful,but came from a poor background.She
gave up herself to be a part of the perfect
world.But did she make the right choice giving up
the man she loves for the perfect world?

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Dailycommenter 98 streak #1
I am trying to find an old story on here but I cannot remember the title so I am going through all the story links I found this and now looking forward to reading this
summer-star
#2
Visiting old fics!
summer-star
#3
Visiting old fics!
aeternus
#4
Congrats! :)
sehunbie
#5
congratulations!
moonalopsia
#6
Congrats~ :)
taecsica
#7
congrats on being today's random fic !!
crackerslime #8
Congrats on the feature:)
olivebread #9
congrats~!
babo_cy
#10
Kyaaaa i'm actually a fan of Fahrenheit and SHE! And yes, I ship them! Haha