Chapter 13: what's with u cho kyuhyun...???!!!being a brat,breaking someone's heart and then all you do is eat and sleep and yet you dare to claimed sungmin back??!!!who are u anyway??!!superman?the most handsome in the earth??!!!
i'm sorry authornim..i just.. i hate kyu.he is really a jerk!i hate him!!!he dare to hurt a kind,sweet,caring boyfriend like sungmin.
he deserve to be more suffer,one year is not enough to punished him.
eunhyuk killing him is not bad idea though.
Chapter 13: Beautiful. this was sooo beautiful ..ugh i was about to cry. Your way of writing is unique yet imple and lovely. I really did feel every single emotion and scene of it .. i almost had that feeling that i was winessing all their ups and downs as if i were with them! God what am i writing? im so emotional i couldn't set up my words properly but one thing that im sure of that continuing writing is a must thing in your case! You are talented and blessed you cant waste up that.
Chapter 13: wow just wow i think this is a really wonderful story. the gush of emotions were there yes of course, but it was just as stable as ming's emotions. the story had a happy ending thats for sure but from the beginning until the end, you're able to maintain the angst level of this story. so hence, this story is as stable as ming's emotions. regardless, i still enjoyed it!
I was following this since around 3rd chapter and at some point I even forgot about it and I'm really happy I found it back because this is one of the better band verse stories ever written. And KyuMin too.
I loved how you made Sungmin open his eyes and reject Kyu, not run into his arms the moment Kyu apologized, it was more real and I like real :)
The change in Ming was very natural and the flow of it was very smooth and believable. Only thing that I wasn't very happy with was when Ming was crying so much and so hard because I can't see him as the crying one at all. But that is only my opinion and I think that despite that he was still a very well drawn character here, after the turmoil he's been through many people would break.
I enjoyed the way you described Siwon, he wasn't pushy and high maintenance like in most cases, congratulations on that. Maybe he was treating Ming a little like a female, but I just imagined he wasn't sure how to go around dating a man :)
Kyuhyun was such a full blooded character here! Despite him being a total I can't find a flaw in the was you created him. From his decision to break u with Ming and go after ZhouMi, through his sudden revelation and to the end when he understood his actions his characted was very consistent for me.
All in all I'm sorry I haven't commented before, I don't even know why I didn't (I'll use my current excuse for everything - I didn't have much time to sit and expressed everything I felt about this story). Thank you for writing this story and finishing, another one of those great ones came to an end and I hope to see more from you :)
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