Fisherman's Register

Description

Sungyeol has heard of distant murmurs of stories about a place that only fishermen know, the kingdom under the waves. He sets off on a journey to know more about this magical kingdom, and hopefully, to find it. Because within the kingdom are two mirrors--Reality and Refrain: one to tell the events of the past, the present or the future, and one to tell the things that a man's heart truly desires. He believes that these mirrors may show him the one thing that he truly desires: the path to bring about the kind and gentle world that his sister has always yearned for.

Foreword

This is my entry to ErisChaotica's 1/3 Enchanted Writing Contest. (Please click the link to get to the page if you wish to join.)

The prompt I got was "enchanted mirror". And, yes. Part of it was inspired by an anime I watched a long time ago, but got to rewatch before I wrote this down. Can you tell what part?^^

I hope you enjoy.

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Harmonia
#1
I guess a little part of this is inspired from code geass, hehe? Since sungyeol wanted her sister to live in a kind and gentle world

Okay, off to read this!
E_magine
#2
Chapter 6: Oh gosh... The end was so unexpected but well done.
E_magine
#3
WHAT?! Man I need to hurry up and read this since you completed it >_<
E_magine
#4
Chapter 2: Good chapter but how come one 'greed' is capitalized while the other isn't? Is it a noun? 'only to realise that greed's grip on the hearts of men has tightened.' Maybe change has to had because it sounds a little awkward XD. Final point is the second last sentence needs to be broken up a bit more :)
E_magine
#5
I've read the first chapter and so I will check out the other two soon. I'll try to provide feedback as I go :)