Romance at Rose Cross Academy[ON HIATUS]

Description

 

You are Ying Ying, your full name is Liu Pui Ying, you live in and attend a recently co-ed  high-class boarding school, rose cross academy, and you are one of the only girls currently at the school. You hear that they're going to hold a press conference at your school and loads of  Kpop stars/bands are going to come, some of the bands, mainly boy bands, are going to stay at your boarding school and they're going to film a drama nearby. Your seen messing about and hanging with your friends outside, because you dont care about kpop stars/bands, as they come in and you catch their attention and so the adventure begins. 
Involves a love confession and love triangles as well as something unpredicted.

Foreword

So I decided to start a new one since I'm at a writers block in my other one. Hope you like it and remember subscribe and comment!!! 

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NessaLuvsKpop
Suffering from massive writers block!!! I've lost it since my exams!! curse you exams!!! anyway please make any suggestions theyre always welcome and thankyou

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princess-sohee
#1
Chapter 10: are you still gonna continue this? ;A;
DefyingDecency #2
Chapter 10: Hey there. While your story is in itself interesting and I will continue to read, I have some advice for you. Your main character is too much of a Mary Sue (a character that is perfect inside and out), and that makes the story kind of flat. A character needs to have at least one major flaw, if not more, to have any character development (unless Ying Ying turns evil in the end, which would surprise me). Try to give her some kind of aspect that isn't totally perfect - it'll make the character much more round and make for a more interesting story with plenty of plot material. Also, if every boy is already in love with her on sight, it kind of takes away the fun of watching two characters fall in love with each other.
On the other hand, your spelling is good, with just a few grammar mistakes, but when it comes to grammar I'm generally too strict so don't mind me. Your banner is amazing. If you work on your characters, this story will be seriously awesome.
Wow, I seriously babbled away just now. You're always asking for reviews, so I figured I might as well give you my opinion... There I go again. Sorry.
Anyways, I'll shut up now, and I'll be waiting for new updates. Thanks! - DefyingDecency
xxxarronyanxxx
#3
Chapter 8: awww Jerry :'(
Bubblethehun
#4
Chapter 4: The story is interestingggg ! Update soon !