Her Mesmerising Beauty

Aspiring Lovers

(A/N=Since There was a mix of opinions I will put both place order and age order so for now here is place order.

Can you all please read all couples' moments instead of reading only your biased couples' moments! Thank you.)


AT JYP University

With SooWook

At Ryeowook's house

When Sooyoung came in Ryeowook's house Ryeowook's mother invited her inside since it was Christmas there was christmas decorations everywhere.Sooyoung was looking at the decorations when Ryeowook,who was not looking who he was talking to,stood behind her.

''Umma!This pyjamas' knot isn't coming out!'' Ryeowook complained while keeping this hands and eyes on the knot which made Sooyoung turn around and found Ryeowook up close to her face.Ryeowook looks up to find Sooyoung,beautifully dressed in an old fashion Christmas dress.

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''AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA'' Sooyoung screamed while closing her eyes when she saw Ryeowook in his pyjamas. ''WHAT IS THIS?!?!?!''

''What happen Ryeowook?Who is screaming?'' Ryeowook's mother asked.

''You look really beautiful.'' Ryeowook praised while adriming Sooyoung's beauty.

Sooyoung turned around to look at him and smiled then she remembered he was in his pyjamas and turned around while Ryeowook quickly ran into his room.


With SeoKyu

At Kyuhyun's house

When Kyuhyun went to change Seohyun slowly started to socialise a bit more than she normally did.She then saw Kyuhyun,nicely dressed,walking up to her.

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''Merry Christmas!'' Kyuhyun smiled.

''Merry Christmas!'' Seohyun said.

Kyuhyun turned around.

''Nerd if you want to say something to me then just do it.'' Kyuhyun smirked and turned back around.

''How did you know that I wanted to say something to you?'' Seohyun innocently asked.

''Eyes nerd.Your eyes are like an open book and I am not interested in any other books.Kyuhyun only reads eyes so tell me what did you want to say?'' Kyuhyun asked.

''Your....Your..clothes'' Seohyun said and Kyuhyun looked at his clothes. ''Your clothes look weird.Today is Christmas and you should be wearing Santa's suit.''

Kyuhyun smiled,stepped a few steps backwards and bowed. ''Whatever you want will be done Princess.''

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Kyuhyun comes out wearing a Santa's suit and sees Seohyun talking to some people.

*Finally she is talking to others!* Kyuhyun smiled.

Kyuhyun walked closer to Seohyun while all the girls were amazed and fangirling in how cute Kyuhyun looked.Kyuhyun walked pass Seohyun and winking at her while Seohyun smiled to herself.

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At SM Junior Hospital

With TaeTeuk

*What is this happening? I didn't know that matters would be this serious.Oh god you know that I was doing this to satisfy my ego so Taeyeon could ask forgiveness to me but now what should I do? How will I be able to save both me and Taeyeon?!* Leeteuk was worried.

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At the reception

''Dr.Taeyeon!'' Leeteuk called out. ''I really need to talk to you.''

''Dr.Leeteuk Park your duty is in the lab so what are you doing here?!'' Taeyeon asked.

''Dr.Taeyeon I really need to talk to you.'' Leeteuk said.

''Back to your duty NOW.'' Taeyeon demanded while walking.

''This is really important so please listen!'' Leeteuk begged.

''DR.LEETEUK PARK! YOU ARE TRYING TO NEGLECT YOUR DUTY JUST BECAUSE YOUR DUTY IS IN THE LAB.'' Taeyeon shouted.

''Please listen to me.'' Leeteuk said.

''SAY IT! What do you want to say!'' Taeyeon loudly said.

Leeteuk hesistated.

''Dr.Taeyeon!'' Dr.Bom called out and Leeteuk turned around to see the file which had his photoshop pictures in.

''Dr.Bom?'' Taeyeon asked.

''I want to say you something.'' Dr.Bom said.

''Which patients' report is it?'' Taeyeon asked.

''It isn't a patients' report.'' Dr.Bom answered. ''I need to show you something.''

''Bom you can come later.I am talking to Dr.Taeyeon right now okay.'' Leeteuk talked.

''Dr.Bom what is it? I can talk to Leeteuk everynow and then.'' Taeyeon said.

''I wanted to ask if you have any enemies?'' Dr.Bom asked.

''I do have an enemy but it isn't important to talk about him!'' Taeyeon answered while looking at Leeteuk,who was panicking.

''Did anyone follow you for the past days?'' Dr.Bom asked.

''Bom I told you to go away from here! I need to talk to Dr.Taeyeon privately.'' Leeteuk whispered. ''Dr.Taeyeon come with me I want to tell you something!''

''DR.LEETEUK BACK TO YOUR DUTY NOW!'' Taeyeon demanded.

''We have found something in this file.'' Dr.Bom said.

''Give me this file.'' Leeteuk demaded while pulling it.

''What are you doing?! I need to show it to Dr.Taeyeon!'' Dr.Bom said while pulling it back.

Both Dr.Bom and Leeteuk pulled the file back and forth making everywhere inside the file to burst open and everyone saw pictures of TaeTeuk having .Taeyeon was shocked and curious=How did the pictures come like this when they never had in the first place?! Everyone started whispering. Taeyeon,who was shocked by this,picked up a picture.Dr.Krystal came and took the picture of her hand she couldn't believe these pictures.Taeyeon ran out crying and Dr.Krystal followed her to cheer her up.

Taeyeon cried in her office.How did the pictures come like this when she never had with him!? She was embarrassed and hurt by Leeteuk's evil deed.


With YoonBum

At the locker rooms

Yoona grabbed her clothes from her locker rooms and went into the dressing room to change into them.Kibum had came from his duty and was tired.He walked up to his locker and opened it but he mistakly drops his files making him knee on the ground to get them when he saw Yoona coming out wearing different clothes.

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Since Kibum was on the ground Yoona didn't see him and opened up her locker.Kibum slowly looks up to her from head to toe and was mesmerised by her beauty.She looked better in clothes like these rather than her skinny jeans and tube tops she normally wear in work.Yoona was too busy in fixing her hair while wearing her earrings to see and Kibum was quietly observing her so she didn't notice him.Kibum stood up and made a loud noise when he closed his locker startling Yoona making her scarf to fall on the floor.He looks at her and Yoona knees down to get her scarf while putting her extra strand of hair behind her ear lope.Yoona looks at him for a few seconds and pulled her scarf but the poor girl's scarf was stuck on something.She tried to pull it but it just wouldn't come off.Kibum knees down on the floor while looking at Yoona.

''I'll get it myself.'' Yoona said to Kibum but he didn't listen to her as he pulled the scarf and it came out.Kibum watches her wear her scarf and putting her hair on her side.Yoona who sees him watching her tries to break the silence and awkward silence between them.

''Well I was....You know since I have to go on a picnic with mom and dad since I was getting pretty late I thought to change here!'' Yoona broke the silence and explained her reason as in why she is wearing different clothes.

''Did I even ask?'' Kibum said.

Zhou Mi enters the locker room yawning.

''God I have night duty today so I have to stay here longer.Yoona do you have night duty too?'' Zhou Mi asked and Yoona shakes her head.She was about to leave when.......

''Hey where are you going?'' Zhou Mi asked.

''Home!'' Yoona replied.

''Alone?! This late?'' Zhou Mi questioned.

''It's okay.I'll go!'' Yoona assured.

''How is it okay?! If you go alone this late then it won't be good.Who shall I ask to drop you off.'' Zhou said but then smiled when he looked at Kibum. ''Kibum will drop you home!''

''No please I'll go home by myself besides I don't like to bother anyone.'' Yoona replied while looking at Kibum.

''Bother? Kibum will drop you home right? Kibum is a really nice guy who is willing to help anyone so he won't say no!'' Zhou Mi persuaded and left YoonBum alone.

''You don't need to drop me home!'' Yoona showed her attitude to Kibum.

''I didn't even offer.'' Kibum smirked at her making Yoona to give him an evil glare for being rude at her.


With SiFany

In the room full of patients

''Just stay away from me!'' Siwon demanded and Tiffany walked away from him.

Dr.Krystal was taking care of a patient while SiFany had to assist her.Tiffany was all focused and standing next to Dr.Krystal but Siwon was just looking around not even bothered with them.

''This is a case of dehydration so what should we do then Dr.Siwon?'' Dr.Krystal asked and Siwon stood up.

''M-M-Maam!'' Siwon said.

''Dr.Tiffany?'' Dr.Krystal asked.

''First of all the patient needs hydration so we will give the patient some gluclose drip!'' Tiffany informed and Dr.Krystal walked to the next patient.Tiffany looks at Siwon and he sticks his tongue out to her making Tiffany to roll her eyes at his immatureness and walk away from him.

''This patient's accident had happened 3 days earlier and he still has lots of pain Dr.Siwon tell me what will we give to the patient to reduce the pain?'' Dr.Krystal asked.

''Maam! Defoganacidium!'' Siwon answered. (A/N=It's a long word which I don't know how to spell and is often used in Medical terms)

''Why?'' Tiffany asked.

''It will reduce the side effect.'' Siwon replied.

''They help with the liver and kidney?'' Tiffany argued.

''I SAID it will reduce the side effect.'' Siwon whispered.

''It does!'' Tiffany said.

''YA!What is your problem?! When did I said it didn't!? Why are you even arguing with me? Actually why in the world are you even talking to me? Did I argue with you when you told Dr.Krystal the wrong answers?'' Siwon argued.

''I didn't give any wrong answers!'' Tiffany defended.

''Oh yeah obviously give a patient gluclose without testing the patient?'' Siwon sarcastically said.

''DOCTORS! That's it.You both have good theory knowledge but practical knowledge is ZERO!'' Dr.Krystal taunted them as SiFany puts their head down and listened. ''That patient is yours! She isn't reacting to the food and is on IV so for the next 24 hours you will closely monitor her! Do you understand that? Dr.Tiffany you are in charge of the general ward.'' Dr.Krystal shouted.

Dr.Krystal leaves the room and Tiffany walks away from Siwon.

''Stupid Siwon! If you don't even wanna stay here then why don't you just shut your mouth!!'' Siwon scolded himself. ''And these crocodile tears! Whenever she comes she brings trouble!''  (A/N=Siwon refers Tiffany to crocodile tears since she is mainly crying whenever he sees her)

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Tiffany is talking care of the patient who is not reacting to any food.She checks her blood pressure and her heartbeats through the stethoscope.

''Her blood pressure is too low!'' Tiffany frowned. ''Auntie you are fine right?''

The patient doesn't talk back since she is on IV.

On the other side of the room

Siwon is drawing a devil on a patient's leg's cutcaster. (A/N=Cutcaster is the hard bandage people get when they hurt their leg or arm.)

''This is Dr.Krystal aka Devil.'' Siwon said and looked at his watch while grabbing an apple. ''Looks like I gotta go and my duty is off but seriously I do all the work but you guys get to eat a fruit so let's all share the food.''

''Hey can I ask you something?'' The patient asked.

''Sure!'' Siwon said as he sat on the edge of the patient's bed.

''Did you really not walk in Houston?'' The patient questioned.

''Naaah no one really walks there.'' Siwon replied while biting his apple.

''No one?'' The patient was shocked and Siwon shaked his head. ''So how do they go from one place to another?''

''Cars!'' Siwon replied. ''Everyone has cars there!''

''Everyone?!'' The patient asked and Siwon nodded his head while munching on the apple.

''Sorry to say dude but Korea is a big slum!'' Siwon insulted which made Tiffany turn her head around and was angry. ''Why don't you come to my country for a while? The cars,houses are great even the girls!They are so hot.''

Tiffany angrily walked up to Siwon. ''Dr.Siwon please don't talk like this!''

''Like what?'' Siwon laughed.

''Our country doesn't talk like this!'' Tiffany scolded. ''I think you are forgetting the fact that you are in Korea.''

Siwon stood up.

''Miss.Puppy trust me I can't never forget that this is Korea and you know why? CAUSE I HATE IT! What are you saying to me? Don't talk like this and don't talk like that your country talks even more dirtier than this! Wanna hear some? I am right right guys?'' Siwon argued and everyone said yes. ''Like always everyone except YOU is happy.''

''To talk to you is like wasting my time!'' Tiffany told.

''Then don't talk to me and do your work please!'' Siwon begged.

''If you hate our country this much then why don't you go back?'' Tiffany questioned.

''I am trying to do that and the day I get the chance I wouldn't even look back since I'll be out.'' Siwon replied.

''Good since to be a good doctor you need to be affectionate to others and YOU don't have any of those feelings!!!'' Tiffany taunted and SiFany glared at each other.Siwon then ends up laughing.

''Do you know that you are an item? A unique item that should be kept in a museum! And what did you say again Affectionate? Affection and feelings and all that.'' Siwon laughed.


At YG Senior Hospital

With SunSun

At the Store room

SunSun are locked inside the store room.Sunny is looking at the stuff inside the room while Sungmin tries to open the door but it doesn't open.

''YA!'' Sungmin shouted.

''What is it?!'' Sunny asked.

''Because of you I am here so now I think you are trying to take advantage of me since I am alone in this room.'' Sungmin said.

''Pfffttt take advantage of you?! HAVE YOU EVEN SEEN YOUR FACE?!!?!?!?!?!?!? EVEN IF I SPARE YOU IT ISN'T GOING TO BE AN ADVANTAGE!'' Sunny shouted while taking a hair pin out of her hair.

''What is that? Whatcha gonna do with that?!!?'' Sungmin asked.

''This is made in Korea! I will tell you in advance if you even dare to touch me I will poke you to death with this pin of mine!'' Sunny threatened.

''Like anyone wants to even touch you!!!!! And if you dare try to touch ME I will break your hands and show it to you and if I don't then my name is not Sungmin!'' Sungmin threatened back.

''Then go ahead and change your name besides Sungmin is a crap name!'' Sunny said as she threw a light brown box at him which Sungmin threw back.

''Why you!!!!'' Sungmin said and tried to chase Sunny around.SunSun chase each other around the desk which was in between them so they ended up running around the desk and trying to catch each other while shouting and yelling.

''Don't you dare touch me okay! IF YOU WERE NICE THEN WE WOULD HAVE GOTTEN MARRIED A LONG LONG LONG TIME AGO!'' Sunny informed. (A/N=SunSun's families know each other and wanted to get them to get married but SunSun refused since they hate each other so much! Aegyo enemies as they would like to call it.)

''I don't even want to marry you! Even if your dad begs I will NOT marry you.'' Sungmin talked.

''The mistake is that my dad liked you!'' Sunny yelled.

''And my dad also liked you but that stupid cow was a better choice than YOU!'' Sungmin yelled back.

SunSun continued to argue and insult each other.They both pick up a long broom and a metal plate.They both hit each other while hitting the metal plates which made lots of loud noises outside the store room.A janitor came inside the room and...............

''AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA'' The janitor screamed as he saw the room was messy,everything was,out of it's place,on the floor and SunSun were on the floor breathing to get energy.


Sungmin and Hyoyeon are talking.

''Hey! What happened?'' Hyoyeon asked.

''He thinks highly of himself.'' Sungmin complained.

''Who?'' Hyoyeon asked.

''Eunhyuk! Once I get the chance I will teach him a lesson!'' Sungmin said.

''Eunhyuk isn't like that.He is just doing his duty!'' Hyoyeon explained.

''Hyoyeon you don't know Eunhyuk since he is nothing like he is in the inside.'' Sungmin warned.

''That's what I am saying.He can be mean but he is very kind and if you feel bad then I will talk to him.'' Hyoyeon said as she placed her hand on Sungmin's shoulder.

Eunhyuk enters and gives Hyoyeon an uneasy smile when he sees her hand on Sungmin's shoulder and walks off.Hyoyeon follows him inside the locker room.

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At the Locker Room

''You are here!'' Hyoyeon said.

''Yes!'' Eunhyuk replied.

''Eunhyuk what is wrong with you? Did you eat?'' Hyoyeon asked.

''No I am NOT hungry.'' Eunhyuk angrily replied.

''What is wrong with you? Why are you so angry?'' Hyoyeon questioned and Eunhyuk stands up.

''I am so happy when I am angry.You know Happiness!'' Eunhyuk sarcastically answered while opening his locker.

''Eunhyuk!'' Hyoyeon called.

''Besides why are you here? Shouldn't you be with your good friend Sungmin?'' Eunhyuk replied and Hyoyeon realises that he is jealous. ''He is so cute right?''

''Yeah.'' Hyoyeon joked.

''Go and love him then!'' Eunhyuk replied.

''Hey I didn't think of that but won't you feel bad?'' Hyoyeon pretended.

''Why do you care how I feel and go to Sungmin then.'' Eunhyuk answered.

''No I want to be with you!'' Hyoyeon laughed. ''Eunhyuk I was JUST talking to him and he isn't THAT bad.''

''Yeah Yeah since you only see me as a bad person.'' Eunhyuk said.

''Jealously!'' Hyoyeon laughed.

''Me Jealous?'' Eunhyuk asked.

''Yes!'' Hyoyeon laughed.

''Me jealous?!'' Eunhyuk questioned.

''Of course.'' Hyoyeon giggled.

''Fine I am jealous and it is my problem! Why do you care?!'' Eunhyuk replied.

''Yeah that is true.'' Hyoyeon joked.

''Fine then! My problem so I will find it's solution by myself.'' Eunhyuk said. ''I will tell Sungmin about you that he won't even come near you!''

''Eunhyuk you are gonna go crazy.'' Hyoyeon said.

''Yes I am!'' Eunhyuk replied.

''Look you won't do anything like this okay!'' Hyoyeon demanded.

''No I will do that.'' Eunhyuk debated.

''Eunhyuk Please!'' Hyoyeon talked.

''Please!'' Eunhyuk mocked Hyoyeon's voice.

''Eunhyuk!'' Hyoyeon said as she put her hands on her hips.

''Hyoyeon!'' Eunhyuk said as he folds his arm.

''You just don't listen.'' Hyoyeon said as she walked to her locker.

''I can! I can IF you,in front of everyone,say I Love You!'' Eunhyuk betted.

''WHAT?!!? In front of everyone?!'' Hyoyeon exclaimed.


At YulHyo's house

It is Yuri's birthday and everyone comes inside the house.

''Hey Yesung! Yuri's there!'' Eunhyuk elbowed pointing to Yuri's bedroom.

''Oh really? Hyo I do look nice right?'' Yesung asked as he fixed his hair and straightened his suit.

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''You look so sweet!'' Hyoyeon praised and Yesung smiled.

''Give me a hug!'' Yesung said and hugged Hyoyeon but in just a few seconds Eunhyuk seperates them.

''Go to Yuri.'' Eunhyuk reminded.

Yesung picks up a very big basket and carries it into Yuri's bedroom.

''Hi Yuri-ah.'' Yesung greeted as he carried the basket. ''Happy Birthday.''

''Thank You!'' Yuri carried the big basket. ''What is this?''

''It's a bit too heavy.'' Yesung said.

Eunhyuk secretly winks at Hyoyeon and Hyoyeon cutely winks back which makes Eunhyuk very happy.He goes next to her and talks to her.They come back with foods and drinks.

''Yuri-ah please open mine! Please.'' Yesung said.

''Yesung.'' Yuri laughed.

''Please come on everyone tell her!'' Yesung said and everyone agreed.

''Fine!'' Yuri said as she opened the big basket's wrapping.The basket reveals to have lots of fruits and skin products.

''Yuri-ah this watermelon is good for your health and this banana will remove your dark circles and cool your brain! This one has the new Etude's skin cream and face pack which will glow your skin.'' Yesung said while everyone else tried to control their laughter.

''Thanks Yesung!'' Yuri smiled.

''Do you like it?'' Yesung asked and Yuri nodded. ''I knew you would love my gift.''


At the Locker Rooms

Jessica runs inside the locker room crying and sits down on a bench.

''I can't see all of this! What should I do? What do I do?'' Jessica cried and her mascara was all over her face but she couldn't care less the pain she was feeling was already hurtful.She couldn't take it but then her brain went against her by reflashing memories such as......

  • Eunhyuk kissing Hyoyeon
  • Eunhyuk staring at Hyoyeon
  • Eunhyuk hugging Hyoyeon while smiling at her

''Don't Jessica! They are made for each other don't but what should I do?! I do love him!!!!'' Jessica cried but then stopped when she got an idea! She wiped the tears off her face as she walked. (A/N=Jessica had a long time crush on her best friend Eunhyuk but never got the courage to ask him out.)

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At Donghae's office

*KNOCK KNOCK KNOCK*

''Come in!'' Donghae said as he was reading his files.Jessica came in and stood in front of his desk.

''Tell me Dr.Jessica what is it?'' Donghae said but he didn't take his eyes off his files.

''Dr.Donghae I would like to leave YG Senior Hospital.'' Jessica said.

Donghae looks at her. ''Sorry but what did you say again? I didn't hear that properly.''

''I am leaving YG.'' Jessica repeated.

''Dr.Jessica are you informing me or are you taking my permission?'' Donghae asked. ''I am asking you something Dr.Jessica! Are you informing me or are you taking my permission?''

''I am informing you!'' Jessica replied which made Donghae smirk.

''Very good Dr.Jessica but I think you are forgetting the fact that you are JUST a doctor in here and this hospital isn't some sort of gardan where you can come and go whenever you like!'' Donghae harshly responded.

''But I have to go!'' Jessica tried to persuaded.

''I have heard what you wanted to say but I am telling you that you can't leave YG!'' Donghae stated.

''What do you mean?'' Jessica asked.

''Well I said what I mean and that is you can't leave this hospital.'' Donghae replied.

''Dr.Donghae I am telling you that I am not taking your permission I am informing you!'' Jessica angrily yelled.

''THAT'S ENOUGH!'' Donghae shouted and stood up as he threw his file on the desk making poor Jessica startled by this action.Donghae stood next to Jessica.

''Dr.Jessica Jung good student,good marks in schools but there is one problem=Dr.Jessica Jung doesn't stay in any hospital longer than a year! Why is that Dr.Jessica? 3 Times you have changed your job's location! Is it a joke for you to be a doctor? IS IT A JOKE? Or is it your hobby to leave your job in the middle like this? Let me tell you Dr.Jessica if you don't complete your job here then I am sorry to say that you will NOT get your degree and I will see to it.'' Donghae threatened.

''I don't care!'' Jessica replied back to his threat.

''Look Dr.Jessica I am trying to help you and I am telling you NOT to mix your personal and professional life together!'' Donghae advised.

''IT IS NOT PERSONAL!'' Jessica shouted while facing him.

''IT IS PERSONAL!'' Donghae shouted back. ''And we both know this! I saw you crying when Eunhyuk and Hyoyeon were hugging each other.I saw you telling yourself how it hurts and how much you can't stand to see Eunhyuk without anyone else rather than you! I will tell you something Dr.Jessica and it is to focus on YG and your patients nothing else.I already kicked a doctor out of here now I don't wanna lose another one!''


Author=AYO! Author-Nim here!Thanks for reading this chapter.Please comment since I would love to read your comments and how you found this chapter!

So what was your best 3 moments of this chapter and why?

NOT OTP  I MEANT WHICH COUPLES' MOMENT DID YOU LOVE IN THIS CHAPTER!

  1. YoonBum=They won this place by Kibum being mesmerised by Yoona's beauty and how Yoona didn't accept Zhou Mi's offer and he goes ''Did I even offer it?'' XD <3 <3 <3
  2. SunSun=Sunny's threat to poke Sungmin with a Korean pin to death and them agruing on about how they hate each other and their marriage.They hit each other with brooms and metals plates :P <3 <3
  3. YulSung=Yesung being so sweet and giving Yuri fruits and skincare products so she can be happy and beautiful again :D  <3

Tell me which ones are yours!

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MariaClaraCruz
#1
Chapter 89: Finally Kyuhyun! Everybody wants a hubby like Teuk ♥ Hyohyuk cat-dog relationship hahah and poor Yesung lol I'm so sorry to not comment before I'm new to the site and I just have this account because of this fanfic. Is so so good. Can't wait till the next chapter! See you till the next one!
Foreverpinksonegg #2
Chapter 89: Why taeyeon seems like she's the one who doesn't move on at all about her past love,,, i feel hurt about teuk character here, his love for taeyeon is genuine and i hope taeyeon feel the same way too
Foreverpinksonegg #3
Chapter 88: Oh i thought taeteuk will had their intimate moment but, teuk was so gentlemen, i hope they can show more of their love to each other on the next chapter
Bamlisa #4
Chapter 86: omg finally.. thanks a lot for noticing me but pleases i beg you to finish this ?
SoneBuddy96 #5
Chapter 86: Thank you for updating this story
shleeshlee #6
Chapter 86: I thought that TaeTeuk would have another argument but it's a good thing that they didn't. Hope that things between them will continue to go smoothly. I'm excited for the next chapters..화이팅, author님!
zicky_yun #7
Chapter 86: oh god this is amazing, I really love this story, haesica is just spectacular the best couple, the story is crazy, beautiful i really love it please update soon please, please, are a big fan thank you and blessings, you are the best writer, thank you, forgive my bad english hahaha, congratulations this is amazing, amazing
Foreverpinksonegg #8
Chapter 86: Yes thanks for bringing back the story! I thought u abandoned this story already, anyways i like the scene where teuk really give tae a kiss expecting for more sweet moments for taeteuk
Bamlisa #9
Chapter 85: pleaseeee finish it!! ??
nicvic22 #10
Chapter 43: OMG authornim it's wonderful story.. :-) i'm going to reread it.. I love SiFany couple.. Siwon is very Funny... Good job authornim..