Sempiternal Review Shop

Description

-[Sempiternal Shop]-

Sempiternal means having no known beginning and presumably no end, dateless, or endless. Human's spirit is an endless bottle of our Faith and Hope. i named this shop Sempiternal for the reason "A person's love and passion in writing is infinite as our love and devotion to our self and family". 

Writing in an authors life is like the heart and brain of a human.. its what we are. its our passion, our world, Its where we achieve what we cant in reality it satisfies our hungry souls.

-[History]-

this shop is created on the 3rd of April 2013. exactly 7:10 pm (philippine Time)

The difference of this shop to the others is that we personally don't want to correct nor judge our subscriber's or 'costumer's ' in their wrong grammar's or spellings [since we are not perfect ourselves] but if they are really disturbing that it irks and annoys us we would mention it in the Overall opinion.

 

-[Status]-

Open | Closed | Busy | Haitus

Foreword

 

 

-[Rules]-

 

01 | Subscribe first before proceeding and DON’T unsubscribe.

02 | credit the shop after you had receive your request.

03 | Please leave a comment once you’ve requested and once you’ve picked up your review.

04 | You are not allowed to pick or choose the reviewer. It only depends on the available staff. to avoid biases.

05 | NO girl to girl pairings or boys to boys..

06 | its forbidden to bash the reviewers of you will be immediately black listed and blocked.

07 | Feel free to give us your point of view if you think our reviews is unjust for you, but please PM it to the shop owner. [me: Exhziie-aa]

08 | please be patient  when waiting for your review’s, the staff has lives too.

09 | if you are allayed with the review, we would really appreciate it if you up vote this shop.

010 | its better if the story you want to be reviewed is already completed to have a better and complete review but its still okay if its ongoing. 

011 | please no drabbles..


 

-[Rubic]-

 


Title: ~~/5

Did the title fit the story? Is it eye catching?

 Will it grab my attention?

 Does it stand out to thousands of fanfction’s in this website?

 

Foreword / Description: ~~/10

Is it an attention stealer?

 Is it enough to most or all the

Reader passerby’s to move on the Chapter one?

Is it appealing?

 

Appearance: ~~/10

Does the story look Neat and presentable?

 Organized?

 Decent?

 Did you use suitable fonts and colors

 to make it more dramatic and eye-catching?

 

Plot: ~~/20

Is it Unique? Sounds Original

? Or just plain Boring

? Is it an attention grabber that most or all

 the story passerby would stop and give time to read?

 Or its like any other story, Simple, Plain and boring?

 

Characterization: ~~/20

Are the Character interesting?

 How you explain and introduced your characters

 

Flow / Style: ~~/15

Is it smooth and no bump?

 Is the story flow slow or too fast?

 This part of the review we evaluate  your skills

, style and techniques to make the story flow to its end.

 

Chapter Names: ~~/10

Most Of the Author’s tend to get bored or tired in making their chapter titles.  Sometimes the title is over rated or plain boring. Some readers, before reading the whole story they tend to read the chapter tittles first to see if the flow of story is what they wanted.

 

Overall Enjoyment: ~~/10

Is it worthy reading your story? Is it enjoyable?


[Forms]

-[Press Exo-m's Duizzhang for the request form]-

-[Press Exo-k's Guardian Angel for the Application Form]-

 


Bulletin Board

[the place where i put the highest review points and our featured stories of the week.]

Poll Of the week

 

Comments

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impeccableduizhang
#1
Chapter 3: *gasp* thank you so much! ^^ you made me blush reviewer-nim. i don't mind its late.
i was not expecting for a good review. thank you so much.
GreenGardenPop
#2
Chapter 2: Thank you so much for the review...
impeccableduizhang
#3
requested ^^
thank you in advance ^^
GreenGardenPop
#4
Requested...
babymaybesone
#5
I want my story to be reviewed but my story isn't complete yet../sobs/
deibaby03 #6
I want my story to be reviewed <3