The Hiding Beast [ Semi~Hiatus ]

Description

This story is about a boy who wears glasses, not so attractive but he is arrogant that makes him more not attractive at all and his mother is going to States so she is in need for someone to be a personal maid of her son.  Then there's this girl who works and works just for her and her dad so when she heard that a woman is finding for a personal maid she didn't hesitate to apply and just take it.  And then she meets the one who really needs a personal maid, the boy,  can she turn him into a good Beast ?  ~

 

Characters : 

 

Kim Himchan   ~  he's not so attractive (Because he dosen't care that much about his appearance AND he's just ugly in this story because we all know he is very attractive, no hate please =) )

                           ~  he's very arrogant towards everyone and he's very querulous (Full of complaints)

                       ~  he dosen't go out of their house because he don't want people to see him. He                                          

                                      just go out with a cap on.

 

 

 

Lee JiYeon   ~  a hard working girl who tries her best at anything just for her and her dad

                  ~  she's just a normal girl but she's one of the prettiest girl in town

 

 

 

Kang David   ~  a very show-off guy and likes to brag everything he have.

                   ~  he likes JiYeon that he'll do anything just to get her.

 

 

Mr. Lee         ~  JiYeon's father.

                   ~  he and his daughter will do their best for their living.

 

Linda           ~ the friendly maid in the mansion.

                  ~ sh e's very nice towards everyone especially to Jiyeon.

 

Mrs. Kim      ~ Himchan's very busy mother who always goes abroad for work. 

 

 

I got an idea from 'Beauty and the Beast' for this story. But some things aren't from there ^___^ ~

 

 

Foreword

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"and don't be surprised okay? He dosen't talk to people and he dosen't go out of this house"  - Mrs. Kim

"What?!"  Jiyeon   

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"and one of your job is to make him talk to people outside and of course to make him go out, okay?"  Mrs. Kim

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"but I'm curious, why dosen't he go out?"  Jiyeon

"I think you'll understand when you see him" Mrs. Kim

 

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[!!] *Hi! ^___^ It's me AprilRush and this is my first short storyI will repeat it's a short story. I would like to warn you that it is a short story only because you may expect this is a full story that can be up to 30 to 50+ chapters. No, this won't be made up to that much chapters instead this will be just up to 16 to 20 chapters only

*I'm so sorry if I dissapoint you T__T but I'm still learning and I'm still not that good at making stories so I'm just practicing =)) ( I hope you all understand ) 

*I might update the chapter 1 today or tomorrow so just wait for it ^u^ and I would like to Thank to those you read this  (even though this is SO long XD ) Have a Nice day n' STAY AWESOME!! =D

*And feel free to comment anything you want down there but Please: be nice as possible and NO/DON'T put too much Hate down there okay? THANK YOU!! ^u^

*And if you read any similar stories from someone it's just a Coincedence. I don't plagiarize ^____^ PEACE!

 

~  You can check out my fist one-shot here >>> Once Upon a Time: In a Book Cafe ~  ^^

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bookangel2603 #1
Chapter 12: ohh godd this chapter is hilarious yet soo sweet and ouhhh himchan has a 'thing' on her hehe my bias izz 'drum roll plez' haha ZELO cuz his rapping skill is just amazingly awesome ! i don't think anyone can rap out the "zelo style" than himself hehe omg this chapter iss sooo finger in' good haha plz update soon :D
strongbabemegg
#2
Chapter 12: Himchan MY BIASED! ❤❤❤❤❤
strongbabemegg
#3
Chapter 10: Himchan go apologize!!! Hehehe update soon?? I'm excited to know what's her past.
bookangel2603 #4
Chapter 10: oh plez plez plez keep updating! i love ur story n i really really wanna know what happens next! ur story is amazing XD u have my full support! :)
bookangel2603 #5
Chapter 8: ohgawdd David is a freakin jerk !! anw ohhh himchan is beginning to uhm i dont know developing a feeling for jiyeon! :D
bookangel2603 #6
Chapter 5: omg this is a good start for them both ! ooohhh i cant wait what happens next :)
bookangel2603 #7
Chapter 3: wow ur story is great ! i love the way they met and himchan is being a jerk now that's what makes ur story more interesting :)