Hi ... so I think I should write some fluff but it kind of short .. The sweetness is just lost .. Hahaha and I'm really sorry that this fic is not that perfect (even I think like that )
But, can you please correct your typography? You better let go of your (...) punctuation; put the dialog on the other paragraph; and only use the bold type for the very important part. Sorry if I make you feel uncomfortable.
Chapter 1: I love it. I hope your story will turn out to be truth in real life. Yongshin flighting. Please continue to write more yongshin stories. Thank you.
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