Entity Hunting

Description

 

They were just experiencing a miniscule romance in a gigantic world. Chaos erupts from misconception while hope emerges from trust. They both learnt to appreciate the latter.

Foreword

 

The luminescent green dots that blanket their exposed skin make them look like celestial beings. He inhales and all he detects is her irrepressible scent and ash. He can’t see it, but he can feel it. She’s clawing clandestinely at his skin, but the urgency to her actions is pointless. She soon gives up.

A delicate touch brands his arm. A fingernail slides across his skin with gentle precision which can only be defined as her touch. She traces characters onto the surface of his limb and he can’t help but believe that she writes this as a sentimental notion. And, as a farewell.

 


 

A/N: Despite exam pressure and all that terrible stuff I'm in the middle of writing. This is an entry for The Sky Is The Limit || Writing Contest (Round 3: March Madness)

Prompt used: “Somewhere, far down, there was an itch in his heart, but he made it a point not to scratch it. He was afraid of what might come leaking out.”

– Markus Zusak, The Book Thief

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mayuve
#1
Chapter 1: OMGGGGGGGG. from type of writing, it seems more weighter than fanfict i've often read. thus, there are some words that i really dont understand but i know its a diction.
and, to be honest i love your type of writing!! its tidy and neat, i mean in everything. the paragraph, paraphrase, and so on. even the changing paragraph. i found it interesting when you numbered your next paragraph in a smooth way.
the way this stories go is overwhelmed just like an overflowing water. can you get this a sequel??? thanks!!
anyway cheolyong and sooyoungie are my favorite character, like omg i love both of them but i can't imagine they mixed so well in this category!!! thankyou for creating this beautiful story!!<3 <3