Through Thick and Thin [Hiatus]

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She only saw Kyung until she met Sungyeol, Hoya, and Chanyeol all on the same day. Four guys, four choices, four very different possibilities and four extensive potential in-law screenings (and a whole lot of spying) done by her brothers. After all only the best can even dream of being with their dongsaeng.

 

Lee Howon, lady's man and dance machine of Tae River High, "Go out with me, I know you like someone else but give me a chance..."
He was the “JIYOON WHAT ARE YOU THINKING?” Bad Boy Choice- but he had a history.

 

Lee Sungyeol whose childish yet mature personality fits hers perfectly, "I never thought it was possible to have so much in common with someone...”
He was the “Fine, we’ll allow you to see him…” Sensible Choice- but there was something missing.

 

Park Chanyeol who went to Ji Park, he was the enemy but he was such a cheerful person and he made her happy. "We can be like Goo Junpyo and Jandi!" 
He was the “You. Have. Got. To. Be. Kidding. Me. Right?” Romeo Choice- but it was on adrenaline.

 

Then there was Kyung, the person she likes, the one who is confused with his own feelings, "I'm not sure how I didn't notice it before."
He was the “OMG I’M TOTALLY THE BEST MAN FOR THE WEDDING! I WANT TO BE AN UNCLE SOON!” Preferred choice- but there was confusion.

 

All she wanted to do was debut with her friends, shine and do well in the music world like her brothers. But between her brothers and everything else, drama is headed her way, whether she likes it or not. Drama- that was the last thing she wanted, her family already had enough of it to last ten lifetimes. 

Foreword

Disclaimer! I don't own idols, it's not like im SM okay i wont bash on that company that much (i love shinee, suju, and homin!) everything in this story is purely fictional- any relations to actual events is just pure coincidence. Credit to owners of the pictures and gifs that i use, they are not mine, i got them off of google, pinterest, tumblr- the works....


 

If you can catch the puns/allusions leave a comment :) I may reward you later :) with what? Well that is a secret! Don’t worry there will be many throughout the story, there are several that are introduced within this foreward. And can anyone guess who the parents of Jiyoon and her brothers are? The dad might be easier, I haven’t given any clues to the mother yet. Also, disclaimer: age difference will not always be accurate- please don’t get all upset over this, I tried my best but sometimes for the greater plot things will be twisted and it’s not like I make it my goal to memorize the age of over 300 idol stars.

Foreward

It works a little differently in this place. In northwest Seoul in the Eideol district there was Ha Lee Yoo University which sponsored three different high schools, and six different middle schools. The University and the three high schools and six middle schools were known to house great musical talents.

Eleven years have gone by since the incident occurred. The unexplainable mystery that created a rift between Seo Lake and Ji Park- had for the most part disappeared- only hate was left between the two schools. Now most don’t even know why they hated each other; it was just that they do. Now the last three members still connected to the incident have entered their freshman year, two at Seo Lake and one at Ji Park. They have to survive through high school- but they need to get through college too. 

The three high schools used to get along fine.  All three schools contained students from rather well-off families. In fact it was normal for students of Seo Lake High, Tae River High, and Ji Park High to mingle and hang out with each other. Of course an incident changed all that. The incident made Seo Lake and Ji Park into bitter rivals and Tae Park ended up being the middle ground. Students from Tae weren’t on either side; they had friends in both and enemies in both too.

 Each high school had groups that were extremely musically talented. Everything was sort of underground though- it wasn’t like the whole idol scene. In the high schools the groups created their music. They often had “friendly” competitions between the three schools. Members of a group were required to be in middle in order to debut in these competitions. 

 


 

The Muns - each took on a different surname after the incident

Moon Jiyoon (Mun Jiyoon) [she is you if you want]

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-has two older brothers, although her twin would like to point out that he is older too, she would retort that it was only by seven minutes and thirty four second
-her brothers are all rappers, they could all also be considered leaders, although being as lazy as he is her oldest  brother gave that job to their cousin, although he is pretty much the shadow leader in Jiyoon’s eyes
-when she needed to fall asleep when she was little, she didn’t get the lullabies, she was rapped to sleep
-currently attending Seo Lake High, freshman
[PS this is not the same Jiyoon from 4minute]

Woo Jiho, Zico (Mun Jiho)
- Jiyoon’s twin
-though he is one of the youngest members of his group, Block B, he was made leader
-he swears the his Yongguk hyung is out to get him because his group debuted first
-currently attending Seo Lake High, freshman

Bang Yongguk (Mun Yongguk)
-second oldest in the Mun family
-will debut with his group, B.A.P when the youngest member is in his second year in middle school
-because he won’t debut with his group for some time he has done a few solo performances and collaborations
-Junior at Seo Lake high

Choi Seunghyun, TOP (Mun Seunghyun)
-the oldest
-likes to work from the background which why he isn’t the leader of his group Big Bang
-He is dating Lee Chaerin, better known as CL, of 2ne1
-Junior at Ha Lee Yoo University

The Ahns- Name Changed to Kim after the incident

Kim Soomin (Ahn Soomin)

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-The youngest, freshman at Ji Park
-She takes after her sister in dancing
-Always gets in fights with Suho
-Heechul spoils her the most
-Her best friend is her cousin Park Senah

Kim Heechul (Ahn Heechul)
-Eldest
-Second “commander” of Super Junior
-Junior at Ha Lee Yoo

Kim Hyoyeon (Ahn Hyoyeon)
-Second oldest
-Freshman at Ha Lee Yoo

Kim Joonmyeon, Suho (Ahn Joonmyeon)
-Third oldest
-Sophomore at Ji Park

The Parks- all still kept the same surname, they were all in China when the incident took place

Park Chanyeol
-Third oldest
-Sophomore at Ji Park

Park Jungsoo, Leeteuk
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Eldest
-Leader of Super Junior
-Junior at Ha Lee Yoo

Park Sungyoung, Luna
-Youngest
-Second Year at JTL Middle School

Park Jiyeon
-Second Oldest
-Senior at Ji Park

Park Senah

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-Fourth Oldest
-Freshman at Ji Park
-Raps like Chanyeol
-She and Chanyeol have a love hate relationship

 

Please VOTE!

 

Cassiopeia501
i split chapter 6 in half because it was really long so expect two updates :)

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Ideal_Realist
#1
Chapter 1: Mmm I like the writing! But personally the plot doesn't capture me, and I'll tell you why as not-offensively as I can manage! So please don't be hurt by my words <3 I'm only trying to give some feedback and not trying to put you down!

1. Your writing is great. It flows well and enough detail is given. But try to vary your sentence structures. If you put a full stop and begin a new sentence, look at your last 2 sentences and try to decide on a different word to begin the sentence. For example, it could be "It was ___. But___. Although___." instead of "But___. But___. However___."
2. Too much information not evolving the plot is given. Eg. the stuff about the cousins and Zico's name. The beginning of a story/chapter is especially important in setting the scene, so it's better to have a mood or atmosphere build up in the first few paragraphs, rather than a lot of side notes for character(s).
3. Some things that needed more explanation weren't explained. Now I'm not sure if you went on to talk about what Block B is what the 'group names' are for, but for impatient readers like me who want to understand things from the first chapter, I wouldn't give you a second chance by checking out the next few chapters just to find out what I was wondering about in chapters one.

ALL IN ALL A GREAT EFFORT! This is your first fic so it really is a very decent effort! My first fic was ugly as hell (Childhood Promises) so please don't be discouraged by my harsh advice! Practice makes perfect! <3 <3
miss-tery
#2
Chapter 2: Okay... I loved it!!! I'm only commenting now because I was reading it slowly and trying to grasp the ideas put forth. I usually read everything quickly because it's slow but I like the pace this is set at!! Hope you update soon, you haven't given names to your characters yet >.<