Butterfly on Your Right Shoulder

Description

Niel and C.A.P can deny it but the members can't continue to hold their suspicions as a rather dirty arguement ends up producing visual evidence. Tension has been buildng for a while between N.A.P couple and their members. Will they turn on the couple they promised to support?

 

N.A.P couple with eventual ChangRick

Foreword

This fic is inspired by the picture uploaded on Teen Top me2day account as well as the star call made that same day where Niel's mouth was covered the entire time. I am in no way sayng that Niel was hit or beat my CAP. This is a work of fiction. As such the characters may possibly be portrayed in a light you don't agree with. Although I love all of the members I realize that a subject like this would be hard to cover and hard for some to read.

Although this fic is inspired by that picture the timeline for this fic is unknown and it is all fiction. It does not take place during any of the promotional periods that have already taken place or the one they're currently in the middle of.

Anyway, this fic is rated T but there may be M scenes later (which will be marked as such). Thank you for taking the time to read the forward. Please subscribe and enjoy.

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lovekiller_tsuna #1
Chapter 39: This story is just WOW. It's amazing. How you make me want to read until the end. I
Rinininette #2
This is a really great job (even though you said they were errors). Ricky's point of view just blew my mind! He was progressively losing his innocence, discovering the dark secrets of his relatives and I was completely surprised it felt like it was ME who discovered the dark secrets of the agencies and about corruption (not that now I believe the world is like that, but I had easily impregnated with the visual maknae).
And there was beside the problems, his love life, brightening up the angsty story, I'm glad you finally didn't do the ChangRick angsty too, I would create an ocean with my tears. Yes I cried. Many times. About the same reason each time: N.A.P hurting drama x)
So your explication at the end match with what I understand (yay I didn't lost myself in interpretation xD)
I have to repeat myself: This is a really great fic and I thank you for you hard work
IHaveRuinedMyLife #3
I read your fic one or two weeks ago but wasn't able to comment at that time... But I really have to comment now to say that this is one of not so many fics that will stuck in my head forever because it seems so... real (I hope it isn't)! The way you gave each of them a realistic personality... just fantastic! I really really love your story, its amazing! thank you, author-nim~
emzybbz #4
Chapter 38: My friend told me to read this ages ago and now I finally did and it was perfect! I absolutely loved this fanfiction, well done author-nim!!!
Annemarie00 #5
Chapter 38: So, I already upvoted but I feel to say something about this. First I finished it in like one day and a half, because you kept me, you trapped me inside the tension you created while writing.
I wondered why that is and I think I know now. You described the characters so well, like every person has its own acting, its own way of thinking. I loved the storyline as well, though I had to handle the thought of C.A.P hitting Niel, I didn't believe that. Well, as I said you know how to use the different point of views to create a special feeling. This was actually one of the few fics I had to ponder about. And every time one of my assumptions were right I felt extremely happy. Also I have to mention the reality that washed threw the story. I felt like it could had happened exactly like that, which made me feel very uneasy. We as Angels have no idea what takes place behind the cameras.
Thanks for the great story author-nim, I bow in respect.
NieLisA #6
Chapter 38: I love the endings..you're really brilliant...authornim...daebak...
TeruPinkBUNNY88 #7
Chapter 38: its really the end, one way or another Ricky help them through, its good that NAP finally resolve. love can be describe in many way. and indeed its beautiful. thank you so much for your hard work author-nim!
BANGgwanja #8
Chapter 38: I love you. Im not even going to lie. I love it so much when actual thought and depth and layers and all that goes into a story. And i love that you explained it all so well and you didnt just let things slip at random times just because it was getting tedious having to write around it. AND THANK YOU SHISUS THE ENDING WASNT RUSHED I AM SO GLAD. To be honest I was worried it would be something that tried to solve everything at once but I'm so glad you didn't. You've made me respect you. And I'm gonna say it again- I love you. It may be completely based off of your writing technique (A/Ns included) but to me the writing of an author can express more about what they're actually like than what they act like in real life. Coz we could all be like C.A.P XD not having a way with words. And if you dont make things clear about yourself at the right times then your personality can be percieved in the wrong way by so many different people. Which is why I like the world of fanfiction. It's an escape. And I've got a soft spot for longer fictions and dayuuuumwhen they have a deep well thought out and daring plot its literally something i look forward to reading so much I ignore my headaches and reqd as much as I can.
It's sort of weird(?) But I started crying when I was reading the second last paragraph. Because I could feel how perfectly the ending was gonna fan out and I felt like I've been waiting for an ending this satisfying for a while. (Im still cry that its over tho ;0;) BUT OMGGGGG ON A NOT SERIOUS AND WEIRD SENTIMENTAL NOTE... IM LOOKING FORWARD TO YOUR FUTURE WRITINGS! YAYYYY <3 <3 Ah. Okay. Oh and I actually go back to school from holidays tomorrow... so tonight is the last chance i have of laziness T^T im glad I spent it rereading and finishing this. It makes me look forward to tomorrow :) because life may be irritating right now but thats only because im a sulky teenager whos procrastinating her assignments (whoops) omg character limit D: just. THANKYOU
dreamer89 #9
Chapter 38: It's over ;_______; I think you wrapped up the ending nicely. This was a really great story so congrats for finishing it!
hyangsu #10
Chapter 38: Such a great story, very powerful and kept me interested to the very end. I'm just sad it's over!
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