Chapter 9: Aww! It's alright girl! I'm so glad you came back and let us know what's been going on though. And the story had so much potential! I hope you come back to it one day.
Chapter 6: Look! I scream for an update and I'm the last to read, LOL! This was great! I loved the snarkiness of all the other members. Are they really like this? You know I'm clueless - anything you paint here I'll breathe in. =þ
I felt every word you wrote as she was trying to get out of the hotel... I kept hoping no one would follow and they'd just let her be for once. It makes me think that sometimes it's not so bad to get lost in the crowd. I can't wait to see what you have in store for these two next!
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