Chapter 5
by Joeriel03
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(a/n: its a part of a flashback, about niel..)
(FLASHBACK)
Girl: niel!! please don't go!!!!
the girl was crying..
Niel: i have to..i'm really sorry..
Niel hugged the girl..
Niel: just always remember.. I Love you.. never forget that..
Girl: but in seoul, there are a lot of pretty girls, you might..forget me..
the girl continued crying..harder..
Niel: This is my dream..please let me..
and the girl..finally gave up...
Girl: fine!! leave me!! leave me now!!! forget me!!!!!
Niel: i will leave, but i will never..forget you.. i promise..
the girl kept quiet..she just looked down..
not wanting to see niel's figure, really leaving her..
yes, the girl is hyeya...
(END OF FLASHBACK)
Hyeya is sitting at the grass,
staring at the dark night sky..remembering the past..
she knows she still have the feelings for niel, but not as much as it is back then..
a tap draw her back in the present..
it was ..niel
Niel: hey~ its been so long . . .
Hyeya: it is..
Niel: seeee...? i didn't forget you! hyeya...
Hyeya: thanks for keeping the promise.. *smiles *
Niel: the feelings are still the same way it used to be..
Hyeya: Hey niel.. i missed you..
Niel: i do too..so much.
Niel Hugged hyeya..
it surprised her a bit..but she loved the feeling..
L.Joe was walking the stone path, thinking about her, he was smiling..
yes, L.Joe smiled happily, not only byunghun..but L.Joe too..
When his eyes pass through a figure of two, hugging each other..
to his surprise, it was niel and hyeya...
L.Joe:/Byunghun: they could be...best friends...back then....
he's trying to get rid of the bugging feeling inside his chest..
his heart ached a bit..or not..?
He clenched his fist on his chest and walked back inside..
- - - -
Niel: its getting cold, lets go back in..
Niel held her hands and gently pulled her inside.. hyeya just smiled at his action . ..
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Kekeke, sorry for not updating yesterday...just did something.. really sorry -_-
so now~ here's my update, i hope you liked it guys..^_^
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-- Joeriel03
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Il-Wooki on says:
l joe is sooooooooooooooooooooo cute :) although i feel bad for nile
bittersweet20 on says:
I wish there is sequel..so more excitement.i like this story
Joeriel03 [A] on says:
@gogumacouple --hmm~ sequel. i'm thinking about it though XD not sure yet :3 thanks for leaving your comment ^^
gogumacouple on says:
love it!!!!!!!
are you gonna make a sequel????
btw new reader
Joeriel03 [A] on says:
thanks! InfiniteMyungsooGirl ! im really glad you liked my story! ^^
InfiniteMyungsooGirl on says:
This story is awesome :)
fishcakes on says:
DON'T LET THEM BREAK UP!!
BE TOGETHER FOREVERRRR!! ♥
nu_kiss97 on says:
update soon >_<
bAbYmOcHii12 on says:
Update soon!!
-LeeShinHeeRin on says:
I don't want them to break up!!!
update soon :)^^
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