More Than It Seems

Description

Big Bang has decided to make a parody of the K-drama Beethoven's Virus. But will the theft of jewels from Jiyong's father disrupt the filming?

Foreword

Hi people!

     I actually requested to do this challenge from MusicChibi (who is awesome) a long, long, loooong, time ago. Back then, I created a story and wrote up three chapters, then things happened and I decided to trash it. I hadn't deleted it for a long while, because I still felt guilty that I never finished. Now here I am with a completely new oneshot based on the same challenge - hopefully you guys like it. 

     The oneshot is supposed to be a behind-the-scenes for Big Bang's parody of Beethoven's Virus. I took the term "behind-the-scenes" a little loosely, so let's see what you think about it. Leave comments and constructive criticism - this was meant to be reviewed and so I hope it gets your reviews!

     Thanks for the support!

Sincerely,

Ces

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YoungWoo17 #1
Chapter 1: this was awesomest really! uhm, i like the mystery and the pacing if the whole story.
you're really very good w words. it was so easy for me to picture the scenes, the setting the characters were in. how do you even ;n;
keep writing dear ces! awesomest poster too as always. :)
kim_seul_young #2
Chapter 1: I loved this so much dongsaeng. I am glad I got to read this interesting story, I love the mystery and all the pieces are put well together. Bravo!
rainbowgeum_min #3
Chapter 1: Whao I didn't expect that !!!!! This is so cool to read ! I actually let my mind run free when reading and you are one of the few writers that are able to make me visualize so clearly !!!!!!!! ^^

U are awesome danjjaki ! ♥
aleric #4
/BOOKMARKS/
I'm on my way home from school!
I'LL READ ITS SOONS.
ALERIC CONTRUCTIVE CRITICISM!
harupiglet #5
Chapter 1: Kns so long!!! /bookmarks
I'll read it tmr! Nights \O/
MoonGlowes #6
Chapter 1: Auntie... wow, this is just.... amazing!! It holds much mystery and makes the reader really pay attention and think to try and figure it before the end, like it had done to me.
The filming parts left me with a smile on my face as I read them. And the mysterious parts made me not want to stop reading and curious as to what was to happen next!
The change between the two writing styles(filming scenes and mystery) was rather interesting for them being two different types. What made it most interesting is how you fit them both in together so well, while keeping a good flow of the story!
I loved it and you did a really good job!! <3
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