Baby's Breath

Description

*Baby's Breath

"Baby's Breath" is a traditional, filler flower used most often for corsages, bouquets, and other floral arrangements. It symbolizes purity of the heart, sincerity, and happiness, which is the main reason why florists commonly present it with roses, a powerful symbol of true and everlasting love.

My name is Byun Baekhyun.

My stepbrother's name is Park Chanyeol.

I'm the captain of my school's varsity soccer team and I have good grades, more or less.

My stepbrother has a "below average" IQ of 65. He's been home-schooled for the majority of his life. Yes, he's mentally retarded. Intellectually disabled. Cognitively handicapped. Whatever you call it. He doesn't do much with his life but water the plants at our family's florist shop and try to solve second grade math problems. He still counts on his fingers.

Life's been different, to say the least, ever since he moved in with us.

My name is Byun Baekhyun and I want my stupid stepbrother to disappear.

 

Foreword

*Author's Notes;

(2/6/13): My advertisement bid won! Thank you to everyone who contributed to all the karma I saved up to advertise this fanfiction, couldn't have done it without all of you. That being said, I would really appreciate it if the comments were relevant to the actual story. Many readers leave me great feedback, and I don't want to lose sight of them in the flood of incoming 'Congratulations on winning the bid!' messages. This comment box is for constructive comments only, and feedback is what I saved up my karma points for. If you'd really like to congratulate me, maybe take the time to read the advertised story and comment? It would mean much more. Thanks again!

*Translations & Reviews;

If you would like to translate Baby's Breath into the language you speak, please ask for permission first! You must credit me properly for writing the original story and provide a link on your translated story that goes back to this page. I will not allow duplicate translations of any language, so if it has been translated in one language already, please do not ask to write another! Thank you!

Vietnamese Translations (Thanks to you_and_me!)

Intro l 1 l 2 l 3 l 4 l 5 l 6 l 7 l 8 l 9 l 10

French Translations (Thanks to Belgian-ELF!)

Archive

Indonesian Translations (Thanks to amusuk!)

Archive

*Official Trailer;

Comments

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Yoshi875 #2
Chapter 5: if i'm crying on the fifth chapter i don't know whats gonna happen soon
gditaehyung #3
Chapter 1: I just finished reading this and omg. This is such an amazing story! It just became my favorite story of all! I cried so much harder than I did in other fics. I really loved the ending but I was expecting more. :( But, of course, overall, it was like the epitome of perfection. It was beautiful. I didn't know a fic can make me like this. Even though I hated Chanbaek, I started to like them. Anyways, I love everything in this fic! Baekhyun being a soccer player, Chanyeol being dumb. (lol just joking!) I also loved how this story was written. Expecting more from you, thank you for this wonderful story! Keep up the good work! :) <3
sehunbie #4
Chapter 29: Just finished reading! Amazing story. Amazingggggg. Loved the ending although I was expecting more from the two of them hahaha
I cried several times throughout the story too </3
sehunbie #5
Chapter 24: Omg the ending to this chapter is really scary that I got goosebumps. So unexpected.
Vhope-BTS #6
Chapter 31: Oh my god i love ur fanfic it made me cry...........i could imagine everything sooooo clearly, and the ending felt like a sad movie comming to an end,i dont know the ending is happy, but it makes u curious like you know, oh what will happen when they wake up, lol i wanna know everything that happens until they die. Soooooo amazing!
bubbleiy #7
Chapter 20: This is amazing and beautiful fanfiction. This is a story that makes me cry. Thank you very much! Waiting for some new story...
sehunbie #8
Chapter 6: I'm a new reader and I really really love your writing style (I'm a fan!). I think this story is really good so far (I haven't reached the drama yet) and I love how descriptive you are with the settings and characters. I also think it's amazing how you can make the story flow like that. It's very pleasant to read and I couldn't get bored when reading this at all (Note: I'm very easy to get bored when reading fanfictions, that's why I don't really read chaptered stories. I have tons of uncompleted fanfics to read because I got bored midway!). Your characters are also very lovable. You really deserve the amount of subscribers and upvoters!

However I think this chapter is a little bit too rushed? Idk how to properly express it, but imo you can't just directly develop feelings for someone (especially your brother) just because you were the cause of his retardation. It's weird how Baekhyun's ears turned pink because of Chanyeol, when he used to hate him so much. Objectively speaking, if I was Baekhyun, I would feel nothing in the situation. Because, ofc I'm the one who made Chanyeol that way... But just because I feel guilty doesn't mean I would just directly have feelings for him. I hope this makes sense. This is just my opinion, since you want feedbacks.

I really love this story! And I am expecting a lot from you <3 you're an amazing writer and since I love sad stories, I am excited! ^^
MickeyC7914 #9
Chapter 29: friendly reminder that this has changed my life forever
okay thanks bye
wildvampire #10
Chapter 29: This has been on my bookmarks for like forever I was actually scared to read it thinking it might be too sad
Every word was worth reading it was truely fantastic and I can not find a word to say how much I loved it!
Nish0420 #11
This story is the best best fanfic of BaekYeol... u r awesome Jindeul <3 I love your stories ^_^