Two Ways

Description

HELLO! Well this is my first fic kryber in this first fic is dark and mysterious hope you like, but it will be several artists will be known to history, and apologize in advance for spelling XD

Foreword

The story goes that in this life there is good and evil, Amber does not know his fate holds for him but she is the one that created the apocalypse and the end of the world grows more like a human but inside she feels she does not belong to this world. Until he meets his real father who does know his fate by which she was born, but before the date arrives krystal jung knows who continue to doubt whether your destination or not.
that will make amber? which way shall choose? continue its destination?

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KBwayback #1
Chapter 9: nice nice :D
Bo-Remi #2
Chapter 9: I'm not afraid Amber lose bcoz she have special power, right?
Amber, teach them lesson.
Fighting!
funnyfans #3
Chapter 6: interesante amiga muy buena tu historia
Bo-Remi #4
Chapter 5: Yeah, i think this story is a good one. And if you check and correct grammar mistake, it'll be the best. Be careful with the subject. I sometime try hard to understand who is talking. Most of characters are girl, you should us "She or Her" instead of "He or His". Fist i really misunderstand. I thought Amber is a girl, than I thought she a guy in this story.
OneCentimeter
#5
Chapter 3: Wait so Amber's is in love with Victoria?~~? OMO I ship this couple!! the story is really good, but can fix the gramatical mistakes on the dialogues? It's hard to follow along.
OneCentimeter
#6
Chapter 2: There's a lot more grammatical mistakes in this one than the previous chapter LOL. Not that I mind as much since it's already time consuming just to write one chapter. Why is it that I feel that Victoria has deeper feelings for Amber than she claims? Anyway, looking forward to your next update :)

Why am I the only subscriber for this fic? Don't readers know how awesome this fic is?
OneCentimeter
#7
Chapter 1: Oh dang! Amber parents got killed?!?! So her current situation . looking forward to the next update :)