Secrets (For life)

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Hi everyone this is my first fan fic! Hopefully you all enjoy my story:)

You are a young spy who has been an orphan since you were young. After your parents murder you were injured and taken in by the man you call commander. While investigating a series of shootings you find a man being mugged and you help him out Little did you know that rescuing this man would change your life forever.

 Cho Hee(You) 23 years old. Very protective of the people she cares about always does her best at everything.Good fighter and quiet around new people.

David(original charachter) An old freind of Cho Hee's. He is very protective of her. He would run to the end of the world for her if he needed to. He is very weary of B.A.P. and DaeHyun. Secretly in love with Cho Hee and decides to help protect DaeHyun to prevent Cho Hee from getting injured furthur.

 

DaeHyun(for this story he's24) usually quiet but is very talkitive around you.Can tell you are lonely and wants to protect you. Possibly in love with Cho Hee

 

Commander raised you as his daughter and is very protective. He is also your boss.

 

B.A.P:DaeHyuns freinds they are a little weary of you but after getting to know you they become very protective of you. Zelo is the first to become protective of you.

 

Authors note: I have worked very hard on this story so please do not plagerize my work!! thank you!!

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-Author :)

Foreword

The sensation of falling is very erie. My eyes snap open in time to see myself fall away from the cliff. There in the shadows is

someone smiling. I am continually forced down towards the rocky shore. Suddenly i hit with a sickening crunch sound. I can feel

myself go numb as a tear slips from my eye. Everything is becoming dark and i realize I am going to die. As things are going dark all I

can do is watch on the sidelines, I watch him laugh at my pain as he slowly walks away. Everything is almost dark and the last thing

that goes through my mind is you and how I can no longer keep you safe. Another tear slips from my eye, I hear it hit the rock below

me and everything is plunged into darkness.



 

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HaeJae03 #1
Chapter 8: So freaking good story!!!
Update soon ^^
taelighted #2
Chapter 4: Hmm... The story is quite interesting. I'm really curious how it will develop. But still, you should take a bigger notice at the spaces between words and big letters, it would make the text more comfortable to read. Don't reveal the facts so quickly and also watch out for repetition of words!
Still, I'm really curious about the continuation and your ideas about this fic. And Daehyun is super cute. I could imagine him topless with bleeding side... It must have been awful. The hug was so nice! <3 Author-nim, fighting :)
beastfanag #3
Chapter 3: Great story :D
Continue with the awesome work =)
<3

-BEASTFANAG
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