Light Up Your Eyes

Description

“Taemin ssi, is there anything between life and death?” the boy asked.

Like every day, they sat next to the gradually warming window. Like every day, the plates were cleaned in minutes. Like every day, the cups issued steam and the coffee was a little too bitter. Like every day, the tutor smoked his way through a whole packet of cigarettes till he could calm himself enough for the rest of their lesson.

“You have the strangest questions, Minho ssi,” he amusedly answered, flipping through his book. Like every day, it turned more dog-eared and tear-stained than before. “I’m not sure, though. Why do you ask?”

“Isn’t that where I am?”

Sunlight glanced off the tall boy’s dark glasses and his fingers came to a rest on his own dog-eared and tear-stained book, its hard bumps of transcription wearing out from overuse. He smiled kindly, sensing the tutor’s eyes on him.

“Finish your reading quickly.”

 

 

Like every day, Taemin had no answer.

 

 

 

 

 

Foreword

Written as a contest entry for Everything Strawberry: A Writing Contest by ichigosama

Thank you, ichigosama, for the super stimulating prompts that have people entering even this late into the race (namely, me ^^;;)

Prompt selected:

All credit for poster image goes to BeatrizMartinVidal over at deviantart.

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taeran
#1
Chapter 3: This was one of the best stories I had ever read Thank You for writting such an amazing masterpiece
err4tic
#2
Chapter 3: You are probably my favorite writer in all of AFF. Your words pluck at heartstrings despite their simplicity, or maybe because of it.
SHIN33ee
#3
Chapter 1: Read this awhile ago. Lost it. Found it! <3
marmalody
#4
Chapter 3: Wow, such a beautiful piece <3
Short and bittersweet.


Hope they get together :3
myownsaviour #5
Chapter 3: Omg woah. I didn't know what I expected but this is art - I think I wept with Tae too çç
kara224 #6
so amazing and beautiful. the writing flowed and everything was described in detail that matched the flow of the story :)
tadpole
#7
Chapter 3: I dont know why but im crying in the ending huhu
universal123
#8
Chapter 3: Can you write a sequel for this?? i want to now what happened later with minho and taemin also with key and eonsook since they are married do they have any kids??? Please write an sequel!! pretty please with a juicy strawberry on the top :)
universal123
#9
Chapter 3: I really liked the flow of the story!! the plot was so refreshing with slice of life :)) though the world can really be cruel>.> But I did not get the ending??? Minho accepted Taemin?? any romantic progress??
Panda_Hannie19
#10
Chapter 3: Amazing..! Loved it, thought it made me cry...it's sooooooo good!...