His Empty Space

Description

"I tried to empty my mind from the thoughts of you. You lived in my heart, but I cried like a fool for you and looked for you."

-Secret's "Empty Space"


Lee Jinki, or Onew, is a 27 year old guy that people think is insane for talking to absolutely no one. He is quite good-looking and was very lively and fun until the accident. Ever since the accident, he became a quiet person, who rarely meets anyone except for a few selected people.

Jung Sooyeon, better known as Jessica, was Onew's lover, until it happened. She left Onew in this cruel, harsh world by himself, although that was not her plan. She was the perfect girl for Onew, being that she herself was also very lively and active. The accident changed not only her life, but everyone else's lives too. Especially Onew's.

Foreword

"Beautiful day, isn't it, Sooyeon?" asked Jinki to someone no one else could see.

The man, Jinki, was sitting in a bench at a park. Jinki smiled warmly as though the person he was talking to said just what he was hoping for her to say.

"Ah, but Sooyeon," the man replied back. "Nothing here is as beautiful as you."

The people walking past him stared at him like he was insane, but Jinki didn't seem to notice. He just continued to talk, smile, and laugh at the empty space beside him.

"Onew Oppa!" a young woman called out to him.

Jinki looked up and smiled at the beautiful woman in front of him. "Soojung!" exclaimed Jinki. "What brings you here?"

The young woman ignored him and pulled his arm as a signal for him to stand up.

"Soojung! Arent's you going to say 'hello' to your dear sister?"

The woman looked at him sadly and sighed. "Onew Oppa, I told you to call me Krystal!"

Jinki smiled and said,"And I told you to call me Jinki. Soojung, Krystal is just the outside. Soojung is who you really are. Same with your sister," the man paused and turned to the empty space next to him. "Isn't that right, Sooyeon?"

When Jinki said that, Soojung, or rather Krystal, grew tears in her eyes. She sadly grabbed the man's shoulder so that he would face her. The woman then looked straight into his eyes and said,"Oppa, Jessica Unnie has been dead for three years. You know that."


Hey, there! Thanks for clicking on this story's title! This is my submission for Let's Write to This Modest Proposal [A Writing Challenge-Contest] hosted by MusicChibi  and Scheherazade. My partner for this challenge is naturallygreen . She is writing me a fluff story, while I will be writing her a tragedy. The overall idea is is hers, so I can't take full credit.

Also, many thanks to --honeysenpai (HNSenpai) from »Azuline ¦ Graphics Request Shop → [Open/Hiring] for making the amazing poster and background! :)

Now that that's said, I hope you enjoy the story! Oh, and grab those tissues and a bowl of popcorn while you're at it. You're in for a dramatic ride.

*Commenting, subscribing, and upvoting won't hurt either! ^-^*

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sweetdelight
#1
Chapter 3: Wait... Why is it Jung Soojung at the end? Is it some kind of just twisted finales or just ....so...so?
oneword
#2
Chapter 3: This is good, I can feel the sadness :)
Thanks for sharing!
heesica10 #3
Chapter 2: More:'(((((
heesica10 #4
my eyes is definitely teary right now:((
update!!
sweetdelight
#5
Chapter 1: Ohmyghaddddd you better update soon T_T

I desperately want to know what'll happen next
Followleheart
#6
Chapter 1: Please update again! Your fanfics do inspire me :)
oneword
#7
Chapter 1: Nice read!
Update soon~
leesica
#8
:O must read!!!
PennyBoarder
#9
oh god this seems so sad. im a er for these stories. u gotta update now