Story: The Thing About Twists in Life

Author: threecheers

Genre: Romance

Reviewer: baekyeols

Story Title {4/5}:

The title of the story didn't leave a deep impression in me at first and it seems a bit long. But later on I started to really like it. The title didn't connect to the story much though

Appearance {8/10}:

The poster is really nice, the colors are beautiful, but I suggest to take out or resize all the quotes so it doesn't look messy. Posters can add a large amount of  first impression points, and first impressions decide whether the readers wants to read your story or not.

I loved the way you bolded the first letter of each section, it gave the story an unique touch

Description/Foreword {8/10}:

The glimpse was a bit confusing for me since I didn't get the repetitive ‘yes he knows’. It also seems as if you threw a few parts of the story together and some parts just don't transition to the next smoothly. But it does make me curious and want to click the next button.

I would suggest to organize the description and foreword a bit differently.

So here’s the typical Do Kyungsoo: cold, big eyed, white-s