Chapter 1: I like how they broke up because to me it seems like how a majority of couples I know have broken up. They just stopped feeling the spark.
It's really nice.

Chapter 1: really good. I loved it!

Chapter 1: out of all the breaks up i ever heard of this seems good just a little bit sad but they both accepted it and moved on. nice!

Chapter 1: Ahhh break up's, I guess as far as this one goes it went well right? Both of them seem to know it was coming and they both accepted it. I wish my break up's went like that instead I always end up feeling majorly depressed and during the time of the break up I start balling like a baby, even if I know its coming I still cry. I would imagine they'd still be sad about it I mean if you think about it how is it that the one person who makes you the happiest, knows you the best , and loves you just suddenly stop feeling love and passion for you. I've always wondered I mean this person makes you feel special and then suddenly you just wake up one day and notice that they don't make you feel special anymore. How can you just stop those feelings of love and passion how do they just dissapear? Anyways this is a pretty sad one-shot it just describes how the fire in their relationship burned out its a pretty sad thing especially because according to everyone they were a great couple and now its over and well its done that's it. Anyways good job this one-shot really made me think about things.