The Stars in His Eyes

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YOU (Kim Nana) are "in love" with Lee Hongki. His smiling eyes light up your world, but he isn't in love with you.
Boo-hoo, typical sob story right?
No. This is about love, friendship, and betrayal. The rollercoaster that your heart takes you as you fall in and out of love, the secrets that you learn, and the friendships that last forever.

 

NOTE: This may seem a little choppy because I'm starting it with no background or "intro". I'm just freewriting this whole thing, so I'll just see where this goes...
No mature content since kiddies don't need to be reading all that ;) 
Also, I'll be highlighting the dialouge because its easier for me to read.

And yes, I used my own first name BECAUSE I CAN.

Foreword

"Nana. Nana-yah! Wake up!" Seunghyun, who was sitting on the couch next to you, frantically whispered. You looked around to see everyone else was asleep on the floors and chairs.

"What, why?" You asked Seunghyun. His expression was so unlike his normal playful mood. You looked around and didn't see a fire or anything, so why was he being so serious?

At the moment you turned back to him, his face was inches from yours. You gasped slightly not expecting him to be so close. "Nana I have a confession to make..." "Wha--" you were cut off by his lips pressed against yours with a passion you've never felt before. Not as though you've ever kissed anyone before, but you felt your heart pound faster and faster as Seunghyun's hands slid down the curve of your back.

You then quickly pushed him away. What were you thinking? What was he thinking?

Seunghyun's expression became disappointed that you didn't want to continue. "Miane... I didn't know you'd react like that, I- I just couldn't let go of my chance."

Was he confessing his feelings for you? After all this time, he was confessing now? Why couldn't it have been your dream man?

Seunghyun interrupted your thoughts by placing his hand on your right shoulder. "Seriously, I'm sorry. I fell for you quite awhile back, but never had the confidence until tonight. I didn't want to see anyone take away the girl I love."

You grimaced. You really felt bad for Seunghyun, but no one knew who was truly in your heart.

"No, it's fine. I understand, it's fine. I'll just pretend like nothing happened, okay?"

Seunghyun's expression lightened a bit, but he still looked distraught over something.

You quickly got up from the couch and headed toward the door. "Where are you going?" asked Seunghyun worrying that he scared you away. "I just need some fresh air."  You replied while escaping into the warm dark night.

The air was so refreshing. Seeing all the stars again made you never want to return to the city. "There goes my first kiss..." You said to yourself quietly. You were actually quite disappointed. That wasn't exactly how you imagined your first kiss. Not the right person either.

You heard laughing coming from a direction behind a large tree. It sounded like the laugh of the man you constantly daydreamed about. Lee Hongki. You knew your relationship with him would never get serious, but your heart wouldn't take no for an answer.

As you got closer you saw Hongki and another girl you'd seen once or twice before. Hongki leaned in and at that moment your heart dropped. That was your dream kiss with your man! On a bench on a warm summer night under the stars. Hongki staring deep into your eyes with a twinkle in his.

You couldn't watch this anymore and ran back toward the cabins. You found a dark quiet room and sat down. You closed your eyes, but all you could see was the image of Hongki kissing some girl. You tried to hard to fight back your tears, but you inevitably let them fall.





-Update coming on March 10. It won't be super long though. Sorry for the wait. 

Nanakawa
Chapter two will be up tomorrow!!! Sorry for the long wait subscribers :( thank you!

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tehsweety #1
Chapter 7: hongki a player?
really?

update soon.
giselle4
#2
Chapter 5: really like it update soon! ^^
blackheart123 #3
Chapter 2: Thank you for updating I love you do much
blackheart123 #4
Chapter 1: I could picture everything
I wanna now whats going to happen can you update soon ^^