Frozen Affections [MF Challenge]

Description

© water_lilly challenge entry. Plot is Memorable Footsteps © 2011.

Foreword

Slowly, she made her way towards the centre of the park. She stared at the empty swing, memories rushing through her mind. It was a late winter night, and she was alone. A gust of wind suddenly blew past her, her hair flowing in mid air gracefully. She hugged herself tightly and rubbed her arms, hoping that it'll make herself warm.

 
"It's cold," she said softly, on the urge of tears.
 
Out of no where, a pair of large and strong arms wrapped around her from behind tightly. She lost her breath for a second and panicked. Slowly, she calmed down, realizing the familiar scent that she'll always remember deeply.
 
"I'm here," he whispered into her ear and buried his face between her neck and hair.
 
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Characters:
 
▪▪ Goo Hara. A cute and loving girl that has lost the most important thing to her.
▪▪ Yoon Doojoon. A smart handsome guy that is what everyone would love to have as a boyfriend.
 
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Story may be my writing, but it is a Memorable Footsteps plot.
Challenge #4 - Winter
 
water_lilly
what's funny is, I wrote this before Hara and Junhyung started dating xD

Comments

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chiakki #1
Chapter 4: Thank you... For sweet & touching story. Love this story so much.. Fighting for another daebak story.
water_lilly
#2
<i>Ara2593</i><br />
omo! That touches me~ Thanks so much :) Never knew it had this much of an emotional impact to my readers O_O<br />
THANKS FOR COMMENTING &hearts;&hearts;&hearts;&hearts;&hearts;&hearts;&hearts;&hearts;&hearts;
Ara2593 #3
wow, daebak!! very touching, :D:D i almost cry
water_lilly
#4
<i>Turtle-Mei</i><br />
YAH! The results of FairyTale Fantasies' challenge beg to differ. You've earned the first places that you got, so congrats unnie ^-^. Proud of what you did, and I <i>know</i> you're going to win other challenges, since you're that awesome :PPPP
Turtle-Mei
#5
Oh.Ma.Gawd. That was such a good ending! ^_____^<br />
LOL @ Yoseob and the rest of the guys making him look bad. xDDDD<br />
Mr Yoo is cool yo! ^^ Who is it? ^^ Ricky by any chance?! ;DDDD<br />
Ahh.. This is so cute, he still comes back even though he's gone.. And they were lovers in the past! :'><br />
I envy your writing, especially the last few sentences, that was rearry clever. xDDDD<br />
Well, slowly Hara will move on~ Thanks for the storyline! ^^;;
water_lilly
#6
<i>Leggoo</i><br />
Thanks ^-^... I'm actually surprised you read this XD... I really like your writing, and to see you having read this is <u>awesome</u> ^^;;<br />
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THANKS TO ALL THE COMMENTS!!!!!! I never knew this fic would get lots of readers :)
Leggoo #7
I loved the ending, especially the last few sentences. :)
water_lilly
#8
<i>danmicana</i>:<br />
hehehe. Thanks ^-^... yeah, if only I could have something like that in my life > 3 <
danmicana #9
i love your story. their love is very touching.<br />
water_lilly
#10
<i>@XxLisalooxX</i>:<br />
hehehehehe, thanks ^-^ Honestly, I thought it wasn't good, but seeing your comment THANK YOU! Glad you enjoyed~~