Wow, this is a nice one~ Never was one for shinee pairings... guy pairings in general really, but this.. this was awesome... I wonder how it would've been as a full length story... anyways, keep up the good work~ ^^d
Chapter 1: WHY WHY.....YOU LET ONEW DIE SOB...SOB...SOB I LOVE ONTAE,but it still good story even with sad ending....i hope when u make another story you will end it with hapy ending....however tq for ur story
Chapter 1: Ahhh author your story was just......*sobs* why did jinki become a maniac and worse why did he have to die :( idk how to feel for this ontae it's just too sadddddddd. And it's really weird esp after watching shinee's wonderful day and jinki's so happy and all. Author I love your writing; when I read ff and it's all rubbish grammar and spelling I automatically assume the story is crap. You're really good!:) write more okay!:)
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