Cheesy Pick-up Lines

Description

You can't pick someone up with a cheesy pick-up line... 

Or can you?

Foreword

Russian translation

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whattalassisolet
#1
Chapter 1: omg i'm not an exol anymore but i just couldn't resist rereading this
Iminthezone #2
Chapter 1: Those pickup lines lmao
xiu_mine
#3
Chapter 1: Funny how Xiu and Lu out-sass and out-cheese each other! For a first fic and a short one at that, this is really well done! I liked how those cheesy pick up li es were actually used in real life. I'd be laughing my head off if I hear them flirting around like this! Lol
danigeo71727
#4
Chapter 1: This was so cute! Xiumin was so sassy here and Luhan so cheesy!
BigBangFanCx #5
Chapter 1: Oh my god its so chessy it hurts xD omfg Xiuhan is so disgustingly CUTE.
Jiyuutora #6
Chapter 1: Hello. Your fic is very lovely. I really love it. May I translate it into my language (Vietnamese) and post on my blog? I hope you allow me to translate.
I am looking forward to your answer. Please, reply me soon!
macysmiles #7
Chapter 1: OMNA so cute but um when minseok calls Luhan cute Luhan thinks omg minseok called me cute but he didn't know his name yet so yea "^"
maya143
#8
Chapter 1: WOW!! I was giggling all thru this fic. Amazingly written, Great job :)