Beauty is never the question...

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One is a kingka of SM High... The other is an ultimate nerd... The hottest guy... The genious of the school.... All the girls swoon over him... All the guys stayed away from her... What will happen when they both meet for the first time in their lives? Annyeong! So this is my very first fanfic and im very new to writing stories related to idols. Hope you enjoy as im not that good in writing stories. And if this fanfic somehow rather coincides with your other fanfics plot, please forgive me because i don't mean to plagiarize. Thank you! xoxo XiaoluElla

Foreword

" Ouch! Agh.... That hurts! " you said. " Are you alright?" Luhan asked, with that doe-eye of his. You stared at him. Was he new here? " Im fine thanks but are you new here?" " Haha... No of course not. Ive been here since day one of high school! " Luhan chirped, amazed at your sudden question. You blushed as he smiled widely. Wait.. If his not new here, then how come ive never seen him before? And his talking to me which is strange because never once a guy have taken a seconds to actually speak with me.Plus his the kingka of our school. Is this right?

Author's Thoughts
XiaoluElla
Hehe... Sorry if you are getting confuse with the story because i had to update some chapters again due to some error in the plot. Sorry!
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Kellybby11 #1
Chapter 20: You must update. I command you to UPDATE !!!!!!!!!
shoutsandmurmurs #2
Chapter 14: Haha thanks for clearing that up. Yeah, I was super confused because I say that the story got updated but it was chapters I had already read!! Anyways, I hope you update soon! ㅅ.ㅅ
Dohyeonju #3
Chapter 1: hi dear:D I have hard time to read. Can you give some space or paragraph.. :( i'm sorry but if the story combine all together, made me dizzy
CaramelsDreamer #4
Chapter 14: Update soon:)^^ I like alr:)
shoutsandmurmurs #5
Woah~ This story is getting really interesting!! I can't wait for the next chapter! (^_^)
-hopefullee #6
Chapter 2: "... a group of amgry students" **angry :P i'm just being an annoying girl now, aren't i? xD

haha omg xD Singaporean accent xD 'dare to stare is it?' xDDDDDD wheee~~~ i'm being a hyperactive person now :P
-hopefullee #7
Chapter 1: 'can't they just find another nerd to play on" **pick on :P

"... their taunting and craps" **crap :P

"Don they feel..." **Don't :P

'I' captilasation :P

"Why cant anybody..." **can't :P

"to male things worse, ..." **make :P

i think you know all the punctuation things haha xD


"you just let them swipe you here and there," i think shove is better? haha (:

"the person that belongs to voice quickly rush up to you" sounds abit weird >< the owner of the voice? haha

"you sigh in relief" **sighed. but if you're writing in present tense then o.O

"and you can just leave with it?" **live :P

"I could only look at him..." i thought it's in general pov?

haha sorry. i sound so mean now >< but i guess you're typing this out on your phone right? cos your paragraphing is not coming out... lol

but not bad!! ^~^ just need to fix paragraphing and some spelling/capitalisations/puntuations mistakes (:

FIGHTING :DDDDDDD
-hopefullee #8
"wait.. if his not new here," He's** haha xD and the captilazations and punctuations got some wrong :P
Lisa_lp10 #9
This seems nice, I'll be waiting for you to update it ^^
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