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I've been reviewing stories for quite a while and it takes me a long time to do even one- but if you click on any of my reviews you'd see why~ They're indeed VERY detailed. XD I work with sites such as Forever With You, Magniftastic Boutique, Lady Comma etc so if you are going to request, you need to be able to wait.. It might not reach your satisfaction but I’ll try my best, so please bear with me? *do puppy eyes*

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❂ News as of 04/03/12  ❂

Hey guys~ Sincere aplogizes from me~ But this shop is officially going on hiatus..T_T sorry about it but there's currently too much on my hands and I would love to have the time to settle everything before commencing again~ The requests would be posted up as soon as possible but I'm afraid the updates won't be fast at all.T_T And I don't know if I have the time anymore to continue the shop... what do you guys think? Please leave a comment - should I continue but take my time updating, or should I just close this shop altogther since my heart is not in it anymore...

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❂ Please try your best not to push me, I'm the only one reviewing and I do have a life outside of the web. (that’s a lie. I just need to do HW...)

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❂ No /Yuri. But I’m fine with rated scenes. (I’m a .xD)

❂ Comment on how I did on your review, so then I can too, get some feedbacks. If there's any question, the comment box below is there to help!

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• A: Long Review: Criterias & Rules stay the same. Review layout and length stay the same. This option is basically what we've been doing all along. Time for Completion: 2 weeks - 2 months.

• B: Short Review: Criterias & Rules stay the same. Instead of the usual detailed and lengthy reviews this would be shorter and more straight-forward. Summarized bullet points would be given in each category along with the score. Time for Completion: 4 Day - 1 week.

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❈ Grades ❈

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☆E- 40% below- You want my honest opinion? Your fic is horrible. Were you even paying attention of what you were doing?>< (Don't worry, I doubt I would actually give anyone that grade.XD)

☆D - 40%-54%- Lots of room for improvements to be honest. The story lacks several aspects and I didn't really enjoy reading it.:(

 ☆C- 55%-69%- It's good. But some area is still lacking. Try reading over your story and fix some mistakes that would make the story flow even better.

 ☆B- 70%-84%-Your story is awesome. I had a lot of fun reading it and I'm sure the others too!:D Keep up the great work!

☆A- 85%-100%- I can read your fic over and over again and I still would't be sick of it. In fact I WANT MORE!!!!! Absolutely adored it~:D

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❈ Citerias ❈

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♪ Opening

●Title-/5 

    ✏Eye-catching? ✏Reflects the Story?  ✏Awkward? Too Long?

●Poster+Background- /5  

   ✏ Overall structure? ✏ Combos of colours? (theme) ✏ Catchphrases/Slogans? 

●Description+Foreword- /10

   ✏ Clear? Confusing? ✏Too much/little of Revealation? ✏Connection to the story?

>>Total: /20<<

♪Contents

 ●Creativity/ Originality- /10

   ✏Sense of Distinctiveness? ✏Well Developed? ✏Grips/Cativates readers?

●Plot- /20

   ✏Interesting twists/cliff-hangers? ✏Consistency of Development? ✏Awkward, skippy scenes?

●Chapter Titles(if applied)- /5

   ✏ focused, interesting? ✏ Too generalized? Or too zoomed in on a particular topic?

●Flow- /10

   ✏ Flow in a realisitc pace? ✏ Scenarios explained well enough? ✏Skippy scenes? Cliff-hangers?

>>Total: /45<<

♪Expression

●Characterisation -/15

   ✏Developement of Characters/Rels? ✏Obvious Individualities to each character? ✏ Major twists and turns in aid of growth?

●Writing Style- /10

   ✏ Distinctive style? (descriptive, clearance of language) ✏Writing Techinques? ✏Clever usage of punctuation?

●Mechanics- /10

  ✏ Spellings? ✏Mistakes? ✏Tenses?

>>Total: /35<<

☆Total: /100☆

Bonus- /5

P.S: This review corner is not limited to any particular artists btw. I welcome all sorts of groups~:D 

Without Delay~ Please request a review?:D I'm friendly and I don't bite, I might sound like a from all the rules and grading criterias and such but really I'm the nicest person you'd meet on earth! *evil laugh*

Lol but really, don't be afraid or anything. I've added a new feature where you can decide the level of strictness on your story, so if you really can't handle harsh criticisms then you know what to do~ ^_^

** Level of strictness has no effect whatsoever on the grading system. It only alters the way I provide criticism to your story.

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