Hanna's last moments.. Or not?

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Hanna's last moments.. Or not? - thriller - chapter image

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Hanna pov:

 

~~ Very big flash back ~~

 

Veronica walked away and left me to bleed to my death. As soon as she was out of sight I got myself together and stood up. She had stabbed me in my stomach and I was loosing blood. I quickly teared a piece of my sleeve and rapped it around my stomach to stop the bleeding. I started walking in the opposit direction that Veronica went. I noticed my hands were soaked in blood and were leaving a little but not-very-noticable trail behind.

 

After a while I finally saw a road. I decided to walk along it and maybe Jenn's mom would see me. When I looked to my left I saw the houses, and Jenn's house.

 

"I'm not going there! Veronica is gonna be there. For sure!".

 

As soon as I got on the road my foot got caught on something and I tripped. I fell down on something hard and twisted my ankle.

 

"Ouch .. Mommie!" I sobbed.

 

Filthy tears were rolling down my cheek. But I got up thinking Veronica could be looking for me. I started limping along the side of the road. My ankle really hurt.

 

I was going along the road for over 10 minuts when I heard a car aproaching, it was a red car. I felt like giving hope up when it passed. But shortly after the red car I heard another car.

 

"Someones here!" I turned around and immediatly froze.

 

It was Veronica in the car. With some dude next to her. SHIT! The car hit me and all went black.

 

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I woke up by a bump. I was lying face down on something cold. My heart skipped a beat when I realized I was lying on Jenn. We were lying on the ground in front of the back seats of a car. It wasn't driving. Suddenly Veronica and the guy stepped out. I waited for a few minuts before I sat up. Had she locked the door?

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kissygirl  on says:
yah! pabo! update!
xxILY

maknaemika  on says:
Ahh. Finally you update!

DalkomGirl  on says:
Ooooh, interesting.. Makes me curious!!;p

kissygirl  on says:
like ^^

SomedayTomorrow  on says:
Hahhhaa, don't worry. It reminds me of Pretty Little Liars. :) Keep writing and update soon ^^

kissygirl  on says:
JeeeJ fun is starting ^^
Veronica: I love youuu
Hannie: please die already
Parker: Veronica new-gay- best friend!
What a lovley story indeed <3

SomedayTomorrow  on says:
Wow, nice story ^^
There's so many twists..

maknaemika  on says:
wow. hanna is sooo strong! Kill veronica, hanna! :p

kissygirl  on says:
Goddamit Hanna~!! F*ck you!!

DalkomGirl  on says:
Hanna still lives! Jeeeeh!!:D
Exciting..

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