A Second Chance at Timeless

Description

"Liyin sat on the swing that hung from a beam on the ceiling. She was humming softly – softer than the songs on the radio inside the house so that only the person who was lying on her thighs heard her. Junsu was half asleep, mostly because of his wife’s voice and the hand that his greying hair."

Foreword

this was finished and posted at other sites last september 12 2008. it was supposed to be for liyin's anniversary as well as timeless'.

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starletgurlz
#1
Chapter 1: at first i'm a bit confused but towards the end i'm melting..
what a sweet story you wrote...luv it..♥♥♥
pastelpinkdreams
#2
Chapter 1: i just saw this now and i dont get how people arent fangirling on this. this is beautiful. amsbdjnddbjdmdmdndkdkslalajsbjanwkdidn ♥♥♥♥♡♡♥♥♥♥♥♡₩♥♥%♥♡%¤%♥=♥♥÷♥♥÷♥₩♡%♡♡~♡~♥`♥¤♥♥♡♥♥♥♡♡l(-())3*&#8$,$:('($;$;$&' ':*' #.icant. i cant.
heederella
#3
wow your story is awesome!! And your writing is great too
The ending was sweet ^__^
Great job =)
iammee
#4
Wow... Ur style is rly unique and awesome!!!! :D
SpeechofSilence
#5
Awww, Ri In and Junsu are together! Good decision Junsu! AND, Ri In, you made a good decision too. Nice. Thanks to the hot water running out. They got to live together, for so long too. Their love is everlasting, no matter what age they are, what obstacles are in front of them. <br />
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Your writing skills are really good. I'm just too bad at writing one-shots. Fanfics too, for that matter. I can't really grasp the right emotions. <br />
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Luckily, this was a happy ending one. Yay! Phew. *wipes sweat* <br />
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Thanks for writing this! :D
joanrose
#6
You're writing skills are great! :)
bottled_jar #7
... and happily ever after... sounds cute. tell me the STOP, REWIND and PLAY thing, is their life a movie? or as if it seems like a movie to the reader?
yuzhouxiaojie
#8
wow! this story is really good! the writing skills are wonderful! <br />
i'm surprised that no one commented! ^__^ it's really good! great job!