Nightswimming

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So I was listening to one of my favourite songs the other day and it gave me an idea for a fic.
I'd narrowed it down to two pairings and asked people which they'd prefer
and well.... Kyungmyun/2Soo won it xD
I hope you like!

The image is kind courtesy of of exows ♥
Thanks a lot for a, making such a pretty graphic and b, letting me use it ^^

Foreword

Set a few years after Exo disband and the members go off to the military one by one. 

When Joonmyun (who, despite his age, is the last to enter service) is released, his emotions run high
and he finds himself chasing old memories and living in the past.
Lost love, Kyungsoo and the beauty of nature meet him head on and Joonmyun is reminded just how wonderful the present can be.

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dusick #1
Chapter 1: man i read it again
your wording... gosh i can't get over it, you have a way with words and it's amazing.
it's like you're an artist, because you paint the most vivid pictures with words.
this is honestly better than anything (including published books) i've ever read, it's beautifully written. both this and the sequel are simply amazing and thank you for writing this!
dusick #2
Chapter 1: why doesn't this have more praise this is freaking beautiful
yejiapsaranghaja #3
THIS STORY OH MY GOODNESS HOW TO DEAL I LOVE IT SO MUCH ;~;
I love your style of writing. It's so vivid <3
funnybunny26 #4
Chapter 1: This was writen oh so beautifully. The way you formed the words created the gorgeous picture in my head I wanna cry. Where the hell I've been before this. Sobs. Thank you author-nim. Reading this made my day. My sudo feels overflow everywhere. ;A;
goodluckmode #5
I was ever so surprised to see another segment to this piece ! Since I've already commented on the first part, this will be mostly directed towards "In the Morning."

Allow me to start by praising your incredible talent in writing. I literally stopped reading several times to simply admire the gorgeous descriptions and spectacular imagery you utilized throughout this masterpiece. Your brilliant choice of rich, poignant vocabulary is phenomenal; you sculpt these perfect sentences that burst with emotion and feeling, captivating the reader and allowing him or her to truly experience the world that you craft in each and every story.
Also, I will never stop marveling at how beautifully you portray Joonmyun and Kyungsoo. Their relationship, as I think I had mentioned in my previous comment, simply leaps and soars above the typical connection between two individuals. They speak so little to each other, but they understand each other to the point where words are almost simplified into gentle reminders of what each one already knows the other is feeling. Kyungsoo's devotion to Joonmyun throughout these uncertain years is heartwarming and comforting, and the way Joonmyun trusts Kyungsoo and exposes himself to the latter, even in his weakest times, shows just how much he loves and values Kyungsoo like no other person in his life.
Ah, I'm writing like an essay and a half here, but I just love your writing so much. It's inspiring and enthralling. Please continue to write, and I wish you luck in your other pieces. Thank you again for sharing yet another splendid story. ))

p.s. sehun you are dumb and a stinky jerk. ))
ori_ssi #6
Chapter 1: I loved this! Amazing job c:
eexiee #7
oh wow how did i not know about this before
i really liked it
i am definitely interested in an update!! this is so so nice wow wow
your imagery is fantastic
Smiling_GabzMe #8
Chapter 2: My SuDO feeling~ OMG!
I'm so anxious about that update!! ^^
And I totally agree with the comment below~ >//<
pandapants #9
Chapter 2: YES a would be great! ///u/// It would round it off pretty nicely, especially since they've swam together after all. xD
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