Chapter 1: This is amazing. The emotions. The angst, you can feel in every word. I feel for Jaejoong. You can't blame him for being guarded. I can understand Yunho, but he let his pride get the best of him. Yet, I want to root for him. To root for them to work out. But I cant help but think that Jae's still broken. Yunho is slowly putting him back together, yet it was him who broke Jae.
Anyways, I love the writing style for this. The flow and execution. It's lovely.
Chapter 1: Beautiful T________T
Gosh, it's just.... a perfect work of art. Their love is perfect. The way you describe their love is perfect. It's fluffy but at the same time it's pretty deep. Gosh.
I couldn't even understand my feelings when I was reading this fic because I was too busy with your words (which are amazing). I love everything about it ♡
You did perfect job. Let me be your fan
Chapter 1: I really want to read a story in which Jaejoong moves on after Yunho left him. This plot in which Jaejoong always waiting for Yunho to comeback is too common and overused, it's bacoming lame.
its a wonderful work. congratulations! your style of writing and presentation makes the story, albeit a simple one, very refreshing and interesting indeed. keep it up!<br />
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<go yunjae!!!>
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