A Mentor, an Apprentice (revamping)

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With an apprentice, comes a great responsibility.

A mentor must be ready to teach, care for and protect his apprentice.

Or else, he shall fail ultimately.

 

 

*This story is currently under revamping. I ask all readers to be patient. When a chapter has been done with revamping, you will see that the chapter name changed to roman numerals. When all revamps are done, this message will also be removed. I sincerely apologize for those who have been reading this fiction since the beginning. After a year or two I've realized my writing style has refined and changed from the past, and after reading through this fic I have found many things that are quite illogical and odd.  I hope you all will stay with me and still enjoy my new, refined version of this fic. This was my very first fanfiction, so I thank you all for the support you've given me, and I hope it'll continue as well! Thank you for your attention, and I apologize for any inconvenience (or annoyance) caused for all readers.

Regards, Kirakishou27

Authors Note 150510  [Newest Update: Chapter X]

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2MiNdReAmEr #1
Chapter 7: This is beautiful <3
ms-way #2
Chapter 6: i am still confuse tho but taemin is warming up to minho thats nice!!
lol jongkey are so funny when they bicker like this XD
thanks for the update!! ^^
ms-way #3
Chapter 5: Is taemin even human? gosh this is interesting! ^^
born-confused #4
Chapter 5: Omg i love this! Been waiting for updates :) authornim fighting!
CarrotOmNomNom #5
Chapter 35: Hmmm... The story and concept is reaally good but it seems very jumbled up and all over the place from the school to the forest to sudden kagamine rin & len robot Taemin. It all seems to be moving really fast and there are a lot of things happening with less character development than what I would usually like to see.

I know you're revamping it but I hope you take in my thoughts into consideration and I can't wait to read it once it has been revamped ^^
DontJudgeMeDude #6
Chapter 31: Hey this chapter reminds me of that anime song Kokoro (heart) by Rin Kagame .
Krease99 #7
Chapter 32: Is the old Taemin coming back? I really hope so! Don't make a sad ending please! >__< <3
kiwi444 #8
Chapter 28: Uhhh!!! So Taemin's really dead for sure?
Can't you do like a Doctor Who chapter where they travel back in time and prevent all of this from happening? Oh well. At least we still have Jongkey........don't you dare, I know what you're thinking! They must together, FOREVAAA! Man, I shouldn't of mentioned Jongkey on the first place. Now you're gonna do something terrible and make the whole world cry. But seriously, keep da Jongkey.
Krease99 #9
Chapter 28: No no no no no NO NOOOOOO!! Taemin can't die! Poor Minho! D'':
Please make him survive somehow! >____<
Update soon please! :'( <3
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