The Last Letter [Song Fiction] *Revised*

Description

When everything seems so perfect, fate then turns everything around.

Foreword

Omo. This is the first story that i wrote with korean characters. I hope you'll like it. Lee Sung Min oppa was my inspiration. 

Well, it was originally supposed to be Lee Donghae oppa but... well it just happened. Ü

.. okay now it's going to be Jae joong oppa. ..

LOL.

i kinda revised the characters and changed it to jaejae oppa. i hope ull like it better. :)

please leave a comment if u want. :)

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Miss-Yora #1
Hey, thanks! i'll be sure to keep your advices! you must be a really good writer.! thanks again! :)
Giraffrey #2
It's the best. Except that the 'you' and 'I' is a bit confusing. you can really bring out the sadnes and only the person with the hardest heart will not shed tears at this. This is so light, but yet heavy. I love the poetic thoughts you italicized. Polish it up a bit more, and it will be literature. I hope you can fulfil your dream of being a writer!
Miss-Yora #3
@jiayixdubu<br />
Thank you for reading! <3
jiayixdubu #4
Nice!! Jaejoong T.T
Miss-Yora #5
@babymichiie<br />
thanks so much !!!! I'll work harder for you! :*
babymichiie #6
Woahh.. Jaejoong is a sad soul. <br />
I pity him so much! <br />
A very well written story. Do write more!<br />
I will be waiting.<br />
<br />
Do read mine and comment too! Thanks in advance! ^^
Miss-Yora #7
Wee! thanks! :D
SerriStar #8
Kyaaaa~ I like this. I really really like this! Nice pairing and story!! JaeRi FTW!!:) <333
Miss-Yora #9
oh thank you so much. :)<br />
"Love again" is the sequel and i hope you read it too. :)<br />
its not yet completed but you could check it out in my page. :) thanks for reading. :*
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