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by chemistrykim
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^^ i'm so sleepy while writing this ZZZzzz. My second nephew just got born a few days ago he's just perfect ^^
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MINA'S POV
I told Taemin that we'd just meet at the amusement park. My mom somehow knew that I'd be meeting Taemin and was even more excited than me. I ended up going early than planned to escape from my mom. I arrived 30 minutes early. Taemin is of course not yet here, I took a seat first watching people come and go, families, some with their friends others were couples. Oh, they look so cute.
I remember when I was still young, Taemin was my classmate back then. I don't usually play with the other kids I prefer to just watch them. Taemin was the only one who would invite me to play with them but I always refuse. The others does not want to play with me so I don't wanna burden Taemin.
Back then there was this girl that is almost always with Taemin. I couldn't remember her name though, well I'm bad with names but I remember that she's pretty. She's like a barbie doll. She's not on the same class as Taemin and I but at lunch time they were always together. I admit I was jealous of that girl. Where would she be right now?
TAEMIN'S POV
My mom kept on talking about how to win a girl's heart. She's even giving me tips and tricks. She wants me to bring flowers for Mina but I said no. If I didn't tell her that I'd be late for my date with Mina my mom would have talked forever. Mina was already there when I arrived. She was sitting alone watching people pass bt like what she used to do when we were younger. I don't know why she doesn't wanna play with us before. I always ask her to join us hoping one day she'd say yes but she'd always refuse then give me a sweet smile telling me to go back and play with the other kids. We we got into highschool I didin't get to see her that much. We were no longer classmates and since we're not that close we don't move in the same circle.
Onew hyung told me they'd be spying on us today. Making sure that we're on a date. Knowing them they might be hiding somplace where they can clearly see us. I would not tell Mina about this. She might feel uncomfortable knowing others are watching us on our date. Well it's not a real date but still it would not hurt if we enjoy this day.
"Hey," I approached Mina. "Waited long?"
She turned to me and smiled. "No, I was early."
"Ready for our date?" I asked her and she nodded. "Come then, we'll do the rides first!"
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MINA'S POV
Taemin can't be serious. The two of us are now waiting in line for the roller coaster. I haven't tried this but he looks so excited I can't tell him no.
"Hey, are yo ok? Is it really ok if we ride this? We can go for a different one if you like," Taemin told me he then held my hand.
How could I say no when he's making me feel happy just by the touch of his hand? "No, I like roller coasters!" I lied. He gave me big smile.
"Really? That's great! we can do it twice then!"
Ahhh!!! KILL ME NOW! Next thing I know I was screaming my lungs out!
Taemin still held my hand throughout the ride but instead of butterflies there were bulls inside my stomach, raging bulls! The ride came to a stop finally. I don't even wanna imagine how my hair looks like.
"That was great!" Taemin was so happy he looks like he's ready to try it again. "Mina...???" he turned to me with a worried look on his face.
"Ahhh!!!" I screamed. Other people looked at us then I ran to the nearest comfort room. When I saw my face in the mirror I screamed again. How could I let my ultimate crush see me like this? I comb my hair but I don't have anything to tie it with, my ponytail came undone with the ride. So I let my hair fall. Wait! I forgot Taemin! I ran out of the ladies room and there he was waiting for me.
"Uhm, are you ok?", he asked still worried.
"Of course, just had to uhm, fix something," I lied. He smiled and took my hand again.
"You look more beautiful with your hair down," he whispered. GOSH, is he saying this to get me ride the roller coaster again? I hope not.
"Let's try the other rides then," Taemin said. I thought he'd take me to another jaw-dropping ride, luckily he chose the merry go round.
TAEMIN'S POV
I was just testing Mina but she did not complain when I chose the roller coaster. I did not mean to scare her but I wanted to see her reaction since she's not scared of horror films. Personally I wanted to see her scream or yell and just lose control. She looks so cute and funny specially after the ride. I'm glad she let her haid down. She has beautiful hair that I'd always wanna touch. she somehow reminds of...
"Taemin..." I heard Mina call me.
"Yes? Sorry, what did you say?" I asked her. She told me she thinks she saw Key, Minho and Onew hyung. Aish, those guys! "They can't be here. They told me they have something to do today", I said then I told Mina we'd try target shooting. I won a pink teddy bear for her. I'm so glad I saw her room almost all of it was in pink so that would make pink her favorite color right?
"Is that Yuri and Jonghyun?" Mina asked. I looked where she was poiting at and sure it was them but I told her otherwise.
"Let's eat first," I grab her hand to get away from them.
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again, sorry for the late update. i hope u don't give up on me ^____^ click next for chapter 13
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Angelapham0715 on says about chapter 60:
OMG I absolutely love this fanfic!!! It so cute and awesome!!! Daebak!!!
ProudPrimX3 on says about chapter 60:
OMG! OMG! This is one of the awesome stories that make me feel and tingly and warm inside :D I love love love love this story! Damn why are there so many excellent stories on AFF?! I mean that in a positive way :D
kekeSHINee on says about chapter 40:
Ignore d 'p' in between d n phone
kekeSHINee on says about chapter 40:
I hate Taemin now... If i were Mina, i wld jus ignore Taemin... giv him d necklace n d p phone back. Ignore him from now on... tat's how i m... i won't bother wif u if u r not gd to me
kekeSHINee on says about chapter 8:
I enjoy d story so far... gamsahamnida for d story
OhMinHa on says:
I should have find this story sooner..Great story.
beyuuhx on says:
I REMEMBER THIS STORY AND ZOMFG I READ IT AGAIN AND I'M CREYING AGAIN QAAAAAAQ
PinkCookie on says:
great story!
tichiharahara on says:
why i didnt find this story sooner??? aaarggh! this story is amazing! omooo i'm so sorry... your other stories are also good! i've read them all! so good!! good luck with 'my unwilling fiance' but this storyis good! luv you and your stories! you are a cassie too! keep the faith!
BalancedCuppycake on says:
Cute and Romantic~! Really good story ^^
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