You Got It Seriously Wrong

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A friendship broken by a simple misunderstanding.

Onew knows only too well how to hide his feelings but even he can’t keep it up forever, especially when he finds himself isolated by his usually loving members.

For a boy with a past history of violence and neglect, there isn’t much more he can take before he crumbles. 

Now the members are forced to face the consequences of their rash actions.

Little mistakes can have grave consequences...

Can they ever be their Shining SHINee family again?

Foreword

Ok first i have to say i got my inspiration from beyond_thisworld 's story 'A Terrible Misunderstanding' which is really good so you should check it out! She has given me permission to write this similar story so please don't give me hate!

This is only my second story and my first SHINee fanfic so please be nice and bear with me!

Please leave a comment if you can, critisism is welcome as long as it is constructive. Feel free to Subscribe if you enjoy this story and comments are appreciated! ^_^

Thanks for reading this, Hope you enjoy it!

Ppyong,

BabyLocket Xx

 

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UPDATE 19/01/2017 - Annyeong! I've been away from this site and my stories for a long time - practically over 3 years and it's been over 4 years since I offically finished this story. This is still my most treasured story and i now plan to revisit it and do some edits. I was 15 when i completed this story on 12th January 2013 so I realise i have a lot of work to do. This story is lacking a great deal, i'm aware, and i will try to fix some of my mistakes and strengthen my writing skill.  I want to thank everyone who's been supporting me both through the time i was writing and also in my absense. You guys mean the world to me. So far i've done a few edits and will continue to slowly go through the story and make corrections (but don't worry i'll leave the story up so you can still read it as i go through the process.) Thank you for all the love you've given me and i hope i can improve this story to a level where you can truly enjoy it as much as i do writing it. Please please do leave a comment if you can - feedback is the main tool which helps me know if i'm writing well enough and that you're liking what i'm writing or not so please do let me know what you think. I love to hear from you. Thank you.

- BabyLocket Xx

Author's Thoughts
BabyLocket
10/12 - Hi! I'm back, i'm just planning on editing the format structure a little, i hope it will be easier to read now ^_^
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12345654321234565432 #1
Chapter 23: Oh my gosh
That was beautiful.
You finished this story really well.
Loved it
aileessa #2
Chapter 23: I loved it. You are great. Author-nim,Fighting!
GaemSha #3
Chapter 22: Huhuhuhuhu I like this story sooo much T_T
I'm not SHINee fans. But I like their song and love to watch their variety show.
And suddenly I found this story~ The feeling is just too much :(
I cried T_T Thank you authornim!!! ^^
NyugenTree #4
Chapter 23: Wow the story is just amazing.
Imagine what it would beElike if they made an actual movie for this. I would totally watch it with a bag of 2 hundred tissues...... anyway awsome story. Definitely made me cry. Good job! ^^
StebXRaided #5
Chapter 23: I re-read this story because I remembered how much I loved it and I realized that I hadn't commented already! So though this is long overdue, I really feel that I have to comment on how beautiful and full this story is. The connection within the characters really felt so real and when it was at its worst, it shattered my heart, twice. The reconnecting was gradual enough so that it was realistic and dramatic, but also felt extremely cleansing at every single milestone and by the end, though I had shed many tears, my heart had been fixed and felt stronger than ever. These types of stories that talk about such strong connections and the small mistakes that can break them (and truth-telling that can make them) really resonate within the soul so much that I really have to wonder how on earth you do it? And I know this is just a comment on a fan fiction but this entire story really means so much to me. I hope it affects other people in the same (or at least similar) way that it has affected me and that more people read this utterly beautiful and stunning story. Keep up the fantastic work, I absolutely love it! :-)
shinee7suprejuniro #6
Chapter 23: Omg this story has made be cry,laugh and angry at the shinee boys and the way they act towards onew, but the end was beautful and heart warming total loved it thanx for writing this
AptonKey #7
Chapter 23: This has either been plagiarized or I've read it before
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