Third String

Description

Third String- Belonging to the third string of a team; one who plays behind the first and second strings; a substitute or replacement.

Foreword

The main rapper and vocalist.

That was Park Chanyeol.

He was never enough compared to the other 5 members.

He dances behind and gets block most of the time- that's alright.

His rap lines were being shared with Kai- that's alright.

Less than 10 seconds of singing lines- that's alright.

He let his other members shine, whilst letting himself stand in the shadows- that's alright.

He is kind, yes. He is nice, yes. He gives in to the others and help them without asking for anything in return.

He is a ball of sunshine- that's right.

 

So what's the point of brushing his dance moves when he's near to the point of oblivion?

What's the point in practicing his rap skills when he could never get the opportunity to flaunt it?

What's the point of even singing when he barely sings?

Why does he even have to meet the high expectations, attend every single one of the rigorous trainings when there are only minimal chance for him to showcase his talents?

 

Even though he doesn't mind being almost like a backup member of EXO- he is still human.

And being human made him possess feelings like jealousy and hatred. Enable him to feel depressed, upset and confuse.

 

He doesn't understand why he can't shine as much as the other members.

This is Park Chanyeol.

 

(a/n) New one-shot! This idea had been in my mind for a while now. I'll start writing it out so do expect it to be up soon. Please support me! I need the inspiration and motivation, Thankyou <3


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kpopartory
#1
Chapter 2: Congratulations!!
arikiki696
#2
Chapter 2: <33333 love this <333
SleeplessKnights
#3
Chapter 2: WOW!!!! It was so good!!! I've got to say that I somewhat felt that Chanyeol doesn't get much and wondered how he felt. You seemed to portray a feeling this successfully. I picked up another small mistake but that's alright. This was amazing so I'd like to thank you for the awesome job!!
shikalila
#4
Chapter 2: yes, i read all of the critiques, and i myself learned about writing too!
i really like your one-shot, i'm glad someone recommended it to me! (leebyungiee~) lol
i also really like that it wasn't - sometimes, the characters don't always have to have the y time, they can just have sweet moments<3
AlicePark #5
Chapter 2: wow...
I won`t lie and say that I read all the critics..
but somehow I liked it...
I mean...
It is really cool that someone take the time to tell you all that
after all.. we all want to improve our writing, and things like "love this" or "this is so sad" doesn`t help you in that way, even though it does encourage you to write more...
If you write another baekyeol, I will definitely read it ",
because you know? I really loved this xD
VIPExotic
#6
Chapter 1: This is exactly how I fear that my ultimate bias feels sometimes. I love his smile, I love his derpy face and actions, but it seems he's hiding some of his true self through all those actions:(
(I hope I'm wrong, and that he truly is one tall, fluffy, smiley furball <3)
One thing is sure: ''his place in Exo- the happy virus can never be replaced.'' :))

Lovely fic^^
sofina11 #7
Chapter 1: Wow this is Daebak!~
I love your styleof writing!
XD
leebyungiee
#8
Chapter 1: Uwaaaah I love the way you write!
macchiato-
#9
Damn, I love it. I just love the way you write and how you put all these into a shot. The editor, too, she/he must have done great :)

I love the vocabulary skills and I love the story line; I love the messages you're delivering AND YES I'M A CHANYEOL-BIASED HERE I have the same thoughts like you so thank you, for writing this :)

You see I'm a little picky in reading stories. When I don't like the writing style I won't even bother to continue reading and I love yours so keep up the good work! Anticipating a lot more from you.
PS otl sorry for the long comment lol