Is this fate or a dream ?

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Its New Years eve, and your going to hang out with your friends at a party in Seoul. The next day you wake up and your in bed with this guy. what will happen next? Love? Engagement? Baby? Divorce? Friendship? Regret? Hate? read more to find out.

Foreword

I just had the urge to write this out, hope you like it and please don’t copy btw I got some parts from the Taiwanese drama "fated to love you” it’s not that dirty I actually DONT go into detail, because I know that there are something’s readers would rather not know =) I cover most cuss words and if there’s an inappropriate scene I make it so that you can understand it even if you didn’t read it, plus there is none. Read and you’ll find out what happens and how I write fanfics, be sure to comment and subscribe if you like it =) please comment and subscribe 

Never mind about the curse word thing cuz I like expressing my thoughts as if im my character and it doesn’t sound right if i add a star in between to cover it up. Most people shouldn’t have a problem with it, but if you do I apologize sincerely. (Hoping i spelled it right) 

Credit to sujudork602 for Alex Lee 

Credit to BamxAngiee for Uki Choi

Credit to MusicChibi for Void

And credit to anonymousunni for Sammy Nam

Please enjoy this story

Character info.

 

Name: Sung Hae-mi

Age: 24

Career: Studying to become a pediatrician

 

Name: Lee Donghae

Age: 24 ½

Career: Singer/actor/songwriter/rapper. Super junior member.

connection (with Haemi): boyfriend. 

 

Name: Super Junior. Leeteuk, Heechul, Hangeng, Yesung, Kang-in, Shindong, Sungmin, Eunhyuk, Zhou mi, Donghae, Siwon, Ryeowook, Ki Bum, Kyuhyun, Henry

Age: Leeteuk (27) 
        Heechul (27)
        Hangeng (26)

        Yesung (26)
        Kang-in (25)
        Shindong (25)
        Sungmin (24)
        Eunhyuk (24)

        Zhou mi (24)

        Donghae (24)
        Siwon (24)
        Ryeowook (23)
        Ki bum (23)
        Kyuhyun (22)
        Henry Lau (21)

Personality: a group of 15 brothers and 13 members. Personality varies from person to person. Group of 15 dorky guys.

Leeteuk: leader of Super Junior and super lovable. He protects s and cares for each of them dearly, as if they were his children. He has a heart of gold, and approaches everything with a bright and hopeful disposition, and never complains despite having so much responsibility.

Heechul: known for being outrageous and scandalous (in a good way). He is a skilled singer and dancer, and though he often has only small verses and stage moments, he is hard to forget. Loud, obnoxious, and divalicious, he’s a talented model and actor.

Hangeng: He’s a friendly, caring person and is a sort of mother hen over his dongsaengs. His striking features and fit body are a surprising contrast with his soft, sweet voice

Yesung: a skilled pianist, known for his beautiful voice and his often self-deprecating humor. He’s a prankster, and a serial cuddler

Kangin: one of the big pranksters of the group and is known for being one of the more manly members. He is known for his gags, his strength, and his unique voice, known for being somewhat of a party boy among Super Junior, cares for his fellow members and is somewhat of a father figure among the group.

Shindong: Shindong is the teddy bear of Super Junior, known for his dance and rapping skills, his amazing energy, and his comedic talent. Known and loved for his large build and sweet demeanor

Sungmin: known as the cutest member of Super Junior, the king of aegyo, and is nicknamed Danhobak. He is skilled in martial arts and dancing, is an amazing magician, has a beautiful singing voice, and can play the piano, guitar, and the drums. He is known for his sweet personality, and for his princely good looks and foxlike charm.

Eunhyuk: known for being the main dancer of Super Junior, skilled at rapping and has a pleasant voice when given the opportunity to sing (though he doesn’t seem to think he’s very good), and is a huge goofball. He loves to make people laugh.

Zhou mi: gentlemanly, dorkier and fruiter than siwon (A/N hehehe)

Donghae: has a lovely voice, is a skilled dancer (one of the main dancers of the group) and rapper (in both Korean and Chinese), and is a kid at heart. He loves to make people happy, and loves children and puppies. He wants more than anything to be a father. He has a very classically pretty face and is known as the “Smiling Angel.”

Siwon:  he athlete of the group, and is known for his handsome features, his modeling and acting, his faith, and his drumming skills. He is most known acting,

Ryeowook: considered the eternal maknae, one of the best voices of the group. He is one of the first Korean artists to appear on Chinese postal stamps. He is known for his beautiful voice and for being a skilled pianist and composer, His small stature and adorable features cement his role as the eternal maknae.

Ki Bum: Serene and laid-back instinctive and controlled and mature. very relaxed, caring person when he's with his friends. Temper when it's brought out of him

Kyuhyun: the maknae of Super Junior, and is known for his hauntingly beautiful voice and awkward, sweet demeanor. Known for his love of video games, and though he is reserved, he has an unexpected comedic side, as well as a blunt side that catches most off guard. His sweet face and awkward charm make him a fan favorite.

Henry: known for his dancing skills, his sweet voice, and his mad violin skills, energetic and lovable.

 

Career: Actors, singers, dancers, rappers, hosts, variety show participants, entertainers, songwriters, modelers, MC’s and DJ’s. (A/N I think that covers everything…)

connection (with Hae mi): they live under the same roof

Oh my god, this took me forever. At first (the personalities) I started out with just personalities but then I got lazy and so I copied and pasted most things from this website (s) I’ve got to give them credit.

http://feel-my-mind.livejournal.com/29055.html

http://www.dkpopnews.net/2010/03/news-13-types-personalities-of-super.html

http://hotyellowfellows.tumblr.com/post/321308128/know-your-super-junior-members

 

Name: Kwon Ji Yong aka G-Dragon

Age: 22

Career: Songwriter/singer/dancer/producer/rapper/modeler 

connection (with hae mi): Ex boyfriend of Hae mi. 

 

Name: Kim Ki Bum, aka Key. 

Age: 19

Career: Singer, rapper, dancer, model, actor, MC and radio host 

Connection (with hae mi): Best friend since middle school.

 

Name: SHINee
Age(s):
             Onew (20)
             Jonghyun (20) 
             Key (19)
             Minho (19)
             Taemin (17) 
 
Personalities: 
 
Onew: random, clumbsy, dorky.
Jonghyun: funny, cute, talkative (in a good way), cool and charming 
Key: random and funny, loving, likes to nag others, very much like an umma, witty, blunt and cool. 
Minho:  charismatic, sweat, caring, manly, loves children 
Taemin: shy around people he doesnt know, playful, cute, generous, caring, fatherly, innocent, gentle, soft spoken, cheerful, mischevious and good tempered. 
 
connection (with hae mi): met Hae mi after Key. Friends.

thank you for reading my super long forward haha i thought getting to know characters would be alot easier if i did this so if there is anything you dont understand please ask me. 

SJ_ELF_1513
i honestly feel like the next chapter is boring.... (ch 29)

Comments

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PhinkLipsThick
#1
Chapter 40: So good! I want a sequel! Fighting authornim!
peiyan #2
Chapter 21: ermm.. may i know the song by ryeowook?
Hawaianlocomoco
#3
Chapter 8: omg im so confuse with the story with so many names!!!
sulminnie #4
Chapter 40: i really had fun with your fanfic.. :) the story is good and the sequencing is all nice and arranged.thanks..keep on writing :)
sulminnie #5
Chapter 28: super love the pics and gifs..:) <3
sulminnie #6
Chapter 3: well, i guess elfs will not going to hurt girls who will be loved by any members of super junior :)
ch3nya #7
Chapter 40: :D i loved this i couldnt stop reading once i started
KKyungMi
#8
Chapter 40: So.. this is over. I'm gonna miss it a lot... i never thought i was gonna love this story so much but it was beautiful. Thank you so much.
KeyLovaSHINeeForeva
#9
POVs:

I advise that you avoid changing POVs in first-person. First-person is meant for one person's thoughts only. First-person omniscient IS possible, but it's rare, and third-person omniscient would make things flow much more smoothly. The sharp and detached changed POVs between each person does not allow for smooth transitions to pass through. Also, when denoting locations, please use sentences in place of using "@ _____'s House", "At The Restaurant", etc.

Vocabulary:

Please avoid including computer language in the fic. If you wish to use Korean, do as your desire commands. Lol. I personally don't to exemplify the beauties and extravagance of English, plus barely of the people on here are Korean. (Note: There is no such thing as "Bwoh?". LOLOL. It's just "Mwoh?".) Your vocabulary has been getting so much better lately, and it shows in the character descriptions of your Foreword. Please fuse those same big words into your story! (: Both the readers and I will love it! (Plus, it makes you look intelligent. Hehe.)

Flow:

I'm kind of confused on this part. Sometimes, it seems as though there are two completely different stories going on with the same people. Otherwise, the flow feels fine. However, I would love it if you would expand upon what the characters are preparing for and how they reach it instead of moving to a completely different scene to start a new plot.

Overall, this story is humorous, enjoyable, and noteworthy, but fixing the grammar would really help gain more professional subscribers (by professional I mean good writers and all). I laughed, I smiled, I took relish in the occasional moments of peace. But for now, this story needs a continuation. Go write!

(P.S. To conclude, I'd like to mention my astonishment at your ability to update so consistently. I am SO temperamental when it comes to writing. It all depends on my mood, fatigue level, and willing to sit for five hours and write, but knowing that you can update so quickly inspires me.)