Breaking ZoNE

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Hello~

This is my first fic posting on AFF...and first fic I've written. I posted this up on Soshified, but I'm uploading it here for non-Shoshified users to read. Also, this will be the edited version where I go back and fix all my typos. Hopefully.

 

So...yeah.

Please look forward to it!

Foreword

 

In the dressing room, three girls in their twenties sat around a tabled stacked with fan mail and gifts from the recent audience. They were all half asleep and running solely on the adrenalin of their earlier performance.

“We need a break! This is the fourth concert we’ve had without a chance to visit the shopping areas.”

“Yeah, but between the three of us it’s hard to not get swarmed by fans. Even with disguises, we can’t spend 30 minutes without getting noticed. We have to get ready for the next release, too, right?”

“Don’t worry. I just talked with our manager. She said that after the final show next week, we can relax for a little while. She didn’t say how long, but she said we would have at least a month before resuming our official activities.”

“Really? Then let’s go to SM Park!”

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In the observation deck, three figures hid themselves in the shadows. They watched as a lone girl relentlessly cut, stabbed, and shot at a mannequin below.

“She’s coming along nicely. I think she may actually be ready. We can finally be rid of that pest!”

“But we cannot trust her just yet. We have to test her and make sure she won’t betray us. She still believes we have the hostage.”

“Betray us? She knows what would happen if she did such a thing. She cares too much about the hostage. Her….”sister” as she calls her.”

“Silence! We will give her the mission now. An opportunity like this may not show up, and we cannot afford to miss it. Send for her now and deliver these instructions. Her target will be going to SM Park.”

 

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loonatic_orbit2
#1
Chapter 20: Late, but I found this story recently and I really loved it! Where I'm from we call the finger game, Sticks. After everything that happened in this story, the ending was nice. It was very fitting. You probably won't see this, author-nim, but thank you for writing this story. I enjoyed it a ton
Sxnwhale #2
Chapter 20: BEST. STORY. EVA!!!! So good good good good. Very awesome author, loved every bit!!
taengsicomg #3
Chapter 20: TNGTGMWG SO CUTE
aullia22 #4
Chapter 20: Wwwahhh..
aullia22 #5
Chapter 7: Wah seohyun the bad one..
I never any idea you can make seohyun to be evil..
katakuzi #6
Great job author! I love your story. Especially the twists haha keep it up ^_^
mhuzicghurl
#7
Chapter 20: ur story is cool
byuntaengsicajjang #8
Chapter 20: Wow this story was really cool!!!
I really like the plot and also the twist in the story...
i can't believe Tiffany was the mastermind..
All i thought Krystal was..
Glad that TaengSic were together again... ^___^
RavingYenny
#9
Chapter 20: Lol Taeyeon & Krystal were playing sticks, always a game to play when your life's in danger along w/ everyone you care about... I'm still baffled on how Yuri was still alive after bleeding to death for the next 30mins most likely w/ a punctured lung, kidney, or broken rib bones. Mmm ribs. Cleary Yuri was infected by the T-virus, only explaination. Just when I thought there'd be some 2Ny since TaeNy would never happened... she's a crazy son of a monkey along w/ her sister.

This is one of those fics I know i'll be broading over for the next couple days maybe weeks b/c of the events that occurred & how it ends. Makes me wanna shank myself w/ a cucumber. Nonetheless it was a great read, i'm amazed on how you were able to throw in jokes in dire situations throughout the whole fic. I was actually hoping for some nice KrysTae but that didn't work out lol.

Ah~ you mentioned KCON on one of the earlier chapters, I went :D! Are you going to the one this year? It's two days this time & in LA!! Holy crap I doubt I can afford one day w/ how well it went last year.

Got off topic, well I just want to finish by saying thanks for posting this fic :].
Snowyywolf
#10
Chapter 20: Wow! An amazing fanfic full of action and betrayal. Aww the ending was very sweet :D