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by Shawol4evaa
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Tags   oneshot   suicide   yongguk   zelo   banglo   | Report Content

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But... but I thought you loved me - oneshot suicide yongguk zelo banglo - main story image

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Characters

zelo bang yongguk

Description

I couldn't believe it... the man I loved for two whole years... just up and leaves... no goodbye, no explanation, no phone call. Just me coming back to an empty house full of memories... our memories. Memories that I will never forget.

Foreword

Hey hey! K, so I'm gonna try writing a oneshot... Zelo and Bang don't really have defined ages here, so imagine them as whatever age you like! I'm writing this late at night so if it sucks I am sorry :/


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BSpade  on says about chapter 1:
Too short, i like it but the ending left me with a ... "is it over" expression .. i was really expecting more in the ending then all of a sudden i read the author's note ... this is really short, i wish you can rewrite this and make it more descriptive and angst-ier.

UnderworldKpop  on says about chapter 1:
OMO I LOVED IT~ fjhdkjhkjfhsafb

CookieBeast  on says:
Oh so good! good job! ^^b

KitsuFireFox  on says:
I love the touch ups you did oh my god i was squealing i swear!! XD Its so fantastic!

KitsuFireFox  on says:
loved it be honwstly the faces in the middle of the sentences were confusing and the p.o.v's would help alot too heh and make it longer! I was hoping to find out were yongguk went, of someone would tell him but it was still a great story and I loved it alot!! ^w^

CookieBeast  on says:
Short but good. Maybe if you write an oneshot like this again, you could write the p.o.v of the other person or the reaction of friends and family or something like this ^^

strawberrylychi  on says:
Wait okay I don't know BAP what.

PrincessOfAsia  on says:
Oh lord, Catie. This is really short.

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